Veil of Secrets
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13 total reviews
Comment from royowen
So Eleanor and Antonio have more or less fount the missing boy, but Cornelius Webb is concerned in this and wants to trap the boy, Miriam is there too, and anxious not to let Cornelius near, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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So Eleanor and Antonio have more or less fount the missing boy, but Cornelius Webb is concerned in this and wants to trap the boy, Miriam is there too, and anxious not to let Cornelius near, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Jan-2025
Comment from Ric Myworld
Ghosts running around everywhere. Good ghosts, bad ghosts, and the little innocent ghost, I think. And now we're waiting for more details. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
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Ghosts running around everywhere. Good ghosts, bad ghosts, and the little innocent ghost, I think. And now we're waiting for more details. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2025
Comment from Tim Margetts
I love the way this is growing bigger with every installment, Carol.
I am trying to keep a watch on the thread but as yet I have no idea how the final tapestry will look.
That's the essence of a good mystery thriller.
Tim x
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I love the way this is growing bigger with every installment, Carol.
I am trying to keep a watch on the thread but as yet I have no idea how the final tapestry will look.
That's the essence of a good mystery thriller.
Tim x
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
It's good that Eleanor can get cross with Garth and Matthew. I loved the coffee blackmail. But at least now we know where Miriam is, and who the boy is. To be trapped in a mirror, and having Cornelius there as well. But he can get in and out, Miriam can't. She has another friend now, desperate to help her, another ghost, Antonio! I'm off to read the next chapter now! Well done, this was really exciting! :)) Sandra xxx
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It's good that Eleanor can get cross with Garth and Matthew. I loved the coffee blackmail. But at least now we know where Miriam is, and who the boy is. To be trapped in a mirror, and having Cornelius there as well. But he can get in and out, Miriam can't. She has another friend now, desperate to help her, another ghost, Antonio! I'm off to read the next chapter now! Well done, this was really exciting! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
Comment from karenina
Oh, grrrrr. No wonder chapter nine felt so difficult. I read it FIRST, and this chapter discloses so much to f the body information alluded to! Miriam was seen in the mirror, she spoke to Antonio! That's how we know the truth about Travis. Well duh on me. I don't generally make this mistake!
Sorry!
Karenina
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Oh, grrrrr. No wonder chapter nine felt so difficult. I read it FIRST, and this chapter discloses so much to f the body information alluded to! Miriam was seen in the mirror, she spoke to Antonio! That's how we know the truth about Travis. Well duh on me. I don't generally make this mistake!
Sorry!
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Eleanor has found Antonio and has him looking for the missing boy, Travis, who may be the one kidnapped from the wrecked school bus. Cornelius is holding Miriam prisoner in a mirror, and she can't get to the boy. Donatelli and Garth want to recapture Doyle and Vince Rossi and can't believe they have the boy missing from the wreck. And Danni seems to be missing. There is a tremendous number of problems all at once.
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Eleanor has found Antonio and has him looking for the missing boy, Travis, who may be the one kidnapped from the wrecked school bus. Cornelius is holding Miriam prisoner in a mirror, and she can't get to the boy. Donatelli and Garth want to recapture Doyle and Vince Rossi and can't believe they have the boy missing from the wreck. And Danni seems to be missing. There is a tremendous number of problems all at once.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
Comment from Carol Clark2
So Miriam's trapped in the mirror by Cornelius, but we don't know where Travis is yet. Eleanor has a sense of humor with those coffee mugs! I guess Donatelli will learn to trust her yet. Lots of good dialogue in this chapter. Blessings. Carol
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So Miriam's trapped in the mirror by Cornelius, but we don't know where Travis is yet. Eleanor has a sense of humor with those coffee mugs! I guess Donatelli will learn to trust her yet. Lots of good dialogue in this chapter. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I would love to be able to get a good coffee that way. Loving the way you're going with this story, and the drama between ghosts to ghost and ghosts to people. Great story-telling, Carol.
cheers,
valda
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I would love to be able to get a good coffee that way. Loving the way you're going with this story, and the drama between ghosts to ghost and ghosts to people. Great story-telling, Carol.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
Comment from Wendy G
Another interesting and absorbing chapter. I'm glad that all the information is being collated, via Eleanor, because only a concerted effort between real peole and the spiritual world will bring theses complex crimes to light, and justice will be served.
Wendy
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Another interesting and absorbing chapter. I'm glad that all the information is being collated, via Eleanor, because only a concerted effort between real peole and the spiritual world will bring theses complex crimes to light, and justice will be served.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
Comment from LJbutterfly
There are villains and evil forces everywhere you turn, both in the natural world (Doyle, Rossi, and the mob), and in the supernatural realm (Cornelius). I'm glad Antonio had an opportunity to see Miriam and is now going to try and save the boy. I was glad to hear from Garth and Donatelli. We can't have Eleanor do all the work.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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There are villains and evil forces everywhere you turn, both in the natural world (Doyle, Rossi, and the mob), and in the supernatural realm (Cornelius). I'm glad Antonio had an opportunity to see Miriam and is now going to try and save the boy. I was glad to hear from Garth and Donatelli. We can't have Eleanor do all the work.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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I'm about to post another chapter...Hope you enjoy it as well. It's been a cold dreary day here and tomorrow I get the carpets cleaned so there might not be any writing. It seems its all I really want to do. Thanks for enjoying!
Smiles, Carol
