Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "Chapter 29 B Wiling Hearts"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
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Comment from Sankey
I realize Phoney money is gone but I am glad I found this. For some reason I missed it. A lovely "all sorts" read. Here's that extra "o" again! Her eyes sparkled. "I didn't say I was going t[o]o,
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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I realize Phoney money is gone but I am glad I found this. For some reason I missed it. A lovely "all sorts" read. Here's that extra "o" again! Her eyes sparkled. "I didn't say I was going t[o]o,
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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I'm sorry you read this with no money attached, but I really appreciate it. HUGS!!!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I enjoyed reading this. You must be doing well with those editing books because this chapter flowed seamlessly. I found no errors and the imagery descriptions and dialogues held my attention. Good work! I love dolphins too! Alex :)
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2025
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I enjoyed reading this. You must be doing well with those editing books because this chapter flowed seamlessly. I found no errors and the imagery descriptions and dialogues held my attention. Good work! I love dolphins too! Alex :)
Comment Written 15-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the kind review. I normally make a few errors.
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You're welcome. :)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Thank God, at least I still get a chance to read a little more from your new book, which as always is amazing. I have no idea how you come up with the perfect subject and plan of action.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2025
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Thank God, at least I still get a chance to read a little more from your new book, which as always is amazing. I have no idea how you come up with the perfect subject and plan of action.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the kind review. This novel is close to finished. I'm ready for the next one.
Comment from Ulla
Great, continuation. I suppose we're coming to an end soon with this story. They had a great day out and the added bonus of seeing the dolphins. Everyone seems happy about everything. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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Great, continuation. I suppose we're coming to an end soon with this story. They had a great day out and the added bonus of seeing the dolphins. Everyone seems happy about everything. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 15-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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I only have two more posts them I'll start another novel. It's already completed. I appreciate you dropping by and reading.
Comment from Sanku
This episode is very enjoyable because we see the couple as almost normal people going on a cruise .They are now like any other couple deeply in love with each other ..I am waiting for the concluding chapters...
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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This episode is very enjoyable because we see the couple as almost normal people going on a cruise .They are now like any other couple deeply in love with each other ..I am waiting for the concluding chapters...
Comment Written 15-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I liked the step away from danger in this chapter. They were allowed to be a normal couple. A date, seeing dolphins and eating seafood. None of the tension they have been living in. Then you turned up the heat with the serial tension. Well written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2025
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I liked the step away from danger in this chapter. They were allowed to be a normal couple. A date, seeing dolphins and eating seafood. None of the tension they have been living in. Then you turned up the heat with the serial tension. Well written. Gretchen
Comment Written 14-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
I like this episode with Noah and Sami are cementing their relationship, growing more deeply into one another, which is essential because your stories are happening from day to day, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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I like this episode with Noah and Sami are cementing their relationship, growing more deeply into one another, which is essential because your stories are happening from day to day, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Thank you for this kind review me.
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Welcome
Comment from Jacob1395
Sami and Noah certainly are putting a heavy burden on themselves for taking the blame for Myra and Ella's kidnapping. I loved the chemistry between Sami and Noah in this scene and I could really feel it blossoming even further. Another excellent chapter, Barbara, I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Sami and Noah certainly are putting a heavy burden on themselves for taking the blame for Myra and Ella's kidnapping. I loved the chemistry between Sami and Noah in this scene and I could really feel it blossoming even further. Another excellent chapter, Barbara, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Another romantic chapter. Their date sounds wonderful. It reminds me of dates with my exhusband. For 7 years it was romantic and fun.
Well done,
Gypsy
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Another romantic chapter. Their date sounds wonderful. It reminds me of dates with my exhusband. For 7 years it was romantic and fun.
Well done,
Gypsy
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the kind review. Romance is wonderful.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Not having a reply from you, I came and checked I'd reviewed this chapter. I read it on Sunday as soon as you posted it, and something took me away. Anyway, this was a slow, sweet, romantic chapter, the troubles tucked away for the day and they now really need to set that wedding date. I can't imagine them carrying on like this much longer. You can feel the tension as they pull away, actually, it's Noah that pulls back, not Sami. But Noah promised her father and he isn't about to break that. Well done, Barbara. I enjoyed reading this chapter. xx Sandra xx
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Not having a reply from you, I came and checked I'd reviewed this chapter. I read it on Sunday as soon as you posted it, and something took me away. Anyway, this was a slow, sweet, romantic chapter, the troubles tucked away for the day and they now really need to set that wedding date. I can't imagine them carrying on like this much longer. You can feel the tension as they pull away, actually, it's Noah that pulls back, not Sami. But Noah promised her father and he isn't about to break that. Well done, Barbara. I enjoyed reading this chapter. xx Sandra xx
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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I think some of Noah's fears are slightly coming out. Those he from being raised in the orphanage. He wants to make sure he's good enough in Sami's dad's eyes. Thank you for the kind review.
