Donald J. Trump Meets the Lord
A bit of historical fiction4 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Interesting and well written. I noticed Obama contunually engaging witn Trump at President Carter's funeral. I was looking to see if Trump would go up in flames. These spiritually diverse people on our county's public stage right now can not be ignored. It's a something as one of my favorite comedians, Paul Riser , would say. Good work! Now we watch the convicted felon take office. :( Alex
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Interesting and well written. I noticed Obama contunually engaging witn Trump at President Carter's funeral. I was looking to see if Trump would go up in flames. These spiritually diverse people on our county's public stage right now can not be ignored. It's a something as one of my favorite comedians, Paul Riser , would say. Good work! Now we watch the convicted felon take office. :( Alex
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I have never wanted fiction to turn into fact so much in my life! I can't even imagine those words coming from his mouth but it's nice to think about and pretend. Thanks for sharing
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I have never wanted fiction to turn into fact so much in my life! I can't even imagine those words coming from his mouth but it's nice to think about and pretend. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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You made my day! My wife and I love you.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
The way you portrayed Trump's journey from skepticism to belief felt real. The interactions between him and Obama were well done. I thought you did a good job with Obama's calm and gentle guidance. That really stood out to me. Great job.
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The way you portrayed Trump's journey from skepticism to belief felt real. The interactions between him and Obama were well done. I thought you did a good job with Obama's calm and gentle guidance. That really stood out to me. Great job.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Can you imagine a heartfelt conversion?
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Can you imagine a heartfelt conversion?
Thank you immensely for the positive feedback.
Comment from Elias Noor
This is a compelling and imaginative story that mixes political drama with spiritual transformation in a way that is both surprising and engaging. With some refinements in pacing and deeper exploration of character motivations, this narrative could become even more impactful. It presents a bold "what-if" scenario that challenges the reader to think about redemption, leadership, and the unpredictable nature of human change.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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This is a compelling and imaginative story that mixes political drama with spiritual transformation in a way that is both surprising and engaging. With some refinements in pacing and deeper exploration of character motivations, this narrative could become even more impactful. It presents a bold "what-if" scenario that challenges the reader to think about redemption, leadership, and the unpredictable nature of human change.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thank you.
I intended for it as a mere flashpoint fiction, just to get the hope from fingers to paper. I figured the characters and their motivations were familiar enough.
