Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Hi Michelle,
My first thought on this post was, wow, what a dedicated daughter. I can't believe all you had to go through to get permission for your mother. What a lot of detail.

Your post is very well written and engaging. It was so deeply personal and so heartfelt.

Thank you so much for sharing,
I'm anxious to see what happened,
Hugs,
Rhonda
Rhonda

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025

Hi Rhonda,
I posted all of it. but due to word count (8,000) I had to break it into 3 "chapters". By your response, it seems like you couldn't see all of it? Can you please LMK if that's the case?

Thank you!

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Again, I really felt the tension and emotions in your story. You've done such an incredible job capturing the depth of your frustration. I could feel the love for your mother. I was especially drawn to how you handled the impossible tasks that kept getting thrown your way. The little details, like the sleepless nights and the moments of doubt, felt so real. Your writing draws me in and keeps me rooting for you as you fight to fulfill your mother's wishes. It's such a powerful and emotional story! I admire your ability to share this journey.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2025