BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 69 "Becoming One"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
18 total reviews
Comment from Debbie Pope
Your poems always send my mind soaring. I read them one time and marvel at your word choices. Then I start reflecting on your meaning. I always see so many. I'm going to take this one literally. I like those haunting wolf calls being referred to as " calls for unity." That's just such an insightful way of looking at a wolf call. Others hear it as an "I'm coming to get you" sound, but you are right. Then the 'family' can come and get you.
I could go on. You are masterful, Yvette.
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Your poems always send my mind soaring. I read them one time and marvel at your word choices. Then I start reflecting on your meaning. I always see so many. I'm going to take this one literally. I like those haunting wolf calls being referred to as " calls for unity." That's just such an insightful way of looking at a wolf call. Others hear it as an "I'm coming to get you" sound, but you are right. Then the 'family' can come and get you.
I could go on. You are masterful, Yvette.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Yvette,
What a wonderful Renga poem. Those three lines send a very powerful message. Pack is indeed family and they don't have to be blood. I find my friends are truer to the pack than my own family. The picture you chose is absolutely beautiful.
I am a big nature lover as you know and wolves are one of my all time favorite. Doesn't mean I'd want to face them head on though. Admire from a distance.
Well done
Cecilia
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Yvette,
What a wonderful Renga poem. Those three lines send a very powerful message. Pack is indeed family and they don't have to be blood. I find my friends are truer to the pack than my own family. The picture you chose is absolutely beautiful.
I am a big nature lover as you know and wolves are one of my all time favorite. Doesn't mean I'd want to face them head on though. Admire from a distance.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from kahpot
A little dark maybe but the end result is wonderful, wolves of any description do hunt in packs, for themselves, self-survival, very well written and presented****kahpot
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A little dark maybe but the end result is wonderful, wolves of any description do hunt in packs, for themselves, self-survival, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Our families stick together when they are faced with a common enemy and I enjoyed the sentiment in your well written poem Yvette, a fine presentation, love Dolly x
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Our families stick together when they are faced with a common enemy and I enjoyed the sentiment in your well written poem Yvette, a fine presentation, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
Comment from royowen
Yes, I guess ewe humans could be called packs, we only welcome those that have the same scent, looks and preferential thinking, but then, nobility has a place in inclusivity, but we tend to be exclusive, beautifully written Yvette, clever girl, blessings Roy
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Yes, I guess ewe humans could be called packs, we only welcome those that have the same scent, looks and preferential thinking, but then, nobility has a place in inclusivity, but we tend to be exclusive, beautifully written Yvette, clever girl, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
Comment from Sally Law
Oh, I love the message in this 5-7-5 renga poem. The pack is family. If you mess with me you get the Bros! I had five brothers and one sister, so I understand. Mama was very protective of all of us. Wonderfully written with your magical touch, my friend. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
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Oh, I love the message in this 5-7-5 renga poem. The pack is family. If you mess with me you get the Bros! I had five brothers and one sister, so I understand. Mama was very protective of all of us. Wonderfully written with your magical touch, my friend. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was really good, Yvette. I'll have to see what followed yours. This is such a great way to learn to write these little ones, and to learn the rules. I enjoyed yours, and love the picture. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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That was really good, Yvette. I'll have to see what followed yours. This is such a great way to learn to write these little ones, and to learn the rules. I enjoyed yours, and love the picture. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Another wolf theme used here in a renga. I think it's great you could get a three-syllable rhyme or near-rhyme with unity/family in such a short space.
What an attractive presentation you created.
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Another wolf theme used here in a renga. I think it's great you could get a three-syllable rhyme or near-rhyme with unity/family in such a short space.
What an attractive presentation you created.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
Comment from judiverse
There is strength in numbers when it comes to warding off enemies. Your follow up to the 7/7 was great. Let's hope we see unity in the new year instead of having people ganging up against rivals. A beautiful presentation, great artwork choice. judi
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There is strength in numbers when it comes to warding off enemies. Your follow up to the 7/7 was great. Let's hope we see unity in the new year instead of having people ganging up against rivals. A beautiful presentation, great artwork choice. judi
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork and nice presentation, Yvette.
-You wrote a good poem about it.
-A very good opening line, followed
by a very good reason why they
need to be unified.
-A very good satori line.
-A good addition to the book.
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-Great artwork and nice presentation, Yvette.
-You wrote a good poem about it.
-A very good opening line, followed
by a very good reason why they
need to be unified.
-A very good satori line.
-A good addition to the book.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
