Deep in the heart of Texas
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Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Charles,
Another great part of your book. I would be surprised if the corn made it to the east coast fresh. Probably was a little wilted and maybe even spoiled by the time it got there. I guess we will never know.
Great job
Cecilia
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Charles,
Another great part of your book. I would be surprised if the corn made it to the east coast fresh. Probably was a little wilted and maybe even spoiled by the time it got there. I guess we will never know.
Great job
Cecilia
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you.
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You're welcome
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, sir, it sure looks like big problems are coming, and you leave no doubt by telling us point-blank as the last statement in your chapter. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Yes, sir, it sure looks like big problems are coming, and you leave no doubt by telling us point-blank as the last statement in your chapter. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thanks Ric.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Once again this is an excellent read.
My Poppa always told us boys, "A little rain will always soften things. It is the storms a person needs to prepare for." (poppa because of the 'My')
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Once again this is an excellent read.
My Poppa always told us boys, "A little rain will always soften things. It is the storms a person needs to prepare for." (poppa because of the 'My')
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Yes, you are right. Thanks Barb.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I think Charlie is right, let's hope the mayor thinks so too. It would be his fault if problems came and it got out of control. Goodness knows what Ralph and Charlie would do if one of them gets hurt! I can't wait to read on, my friend. Well done. :)) Sandy. xxxx
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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I think Charlie is right, let's hope the mayor thinks so too. It would be his fault if problems came and it got out of control. Goodness knows what Ralph and Charlie would do if one of them gets hurt! I can't wait to read on, my friend. Well done. :)) Sandy. xxxx
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thanks Sandy. So glad your work is in first place for book of the month.
Comment from Elias Noor
A thoughtful and immersive snapshot of a town facing the challenges of progress. With more polished transitions and deeper exploration of the brewing "storm," it could become a truly compelling piece. Keep developing this rich world and its characters.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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A thoughtful and immersive snapshot of a town facing the challenges of progress. With more polished transitions and deeper exploration of the brewing "storm," it could become a truly compelling piece. Keep developing this rich world and its characters.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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How nice, thank you.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Charles, yet another great chapter. Yes I can see the novelty of exporting the crops to eastern states. Progress is starting to happen.
...farmers out of business was yet(to be) experienced.
All best, Ulla :)))
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Hi Charles, yet another great chapter. Yes I can see the novelty of exporting the crops to eastern states. Progress is starting to happen.
...farmers out of business was yet(to be) experienced.
All best, Ulla :)))
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thanks Ulla
