BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 68 "~ The Wolf Moon ~"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
8 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
this was very cool. I have heard of the wolf moon. I feel like I've learned a lot about the moon and stars from reading your work. This was no exception. At the pharmacy, we dread full moons, the customers act out of sorts. This was a very short but moody poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
this was very cool. I have heard of the wolf moon. I feel like I've learned a lot about the moon and stars from reading your work. This was no exception. At the pharmacy, we dread full moons, the customers act out of sorts. This was a very short but moody poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Gretchen,
I appreciate your excellent five-star review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I enjoyed reading. I happen to really enjoy full moon and I'm a fan of wolves. I think they're both mysterious and powerful in their own ways. Wonderful job of writing and the presentation.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I enjoyed reading. I happen to really enjoy full moon and I'm a fan of wolves. I think they're both mysterious and powerful in their own ways. Wonderful job of writing and the presentation.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Thank you, I appreciate your excellent five-star review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Jacob1395
I could hear the howl of the wolf as I was reading your piece and your imagery is excellent as always. I thought it was really well written and I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
I could hear the howl of the wolf as I was reading your piece and your imagery is excellent as always. I thought it was really well written and I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Thank you, I appreciate your excellent five-star review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
What a great completion of the question, conclusion of the renga work, so what a great system of getting the variations in styles and thoughts, great job Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
What a great completion of the question, conclusion of the renga work, so what a great system of getting the variations in styles and thoughts, great job Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
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Comment from Bill Schott
This two-line poem, The Wolf Moon, has the proper formatting and brings the theme of lone wolf and moonlight into the expanding renga format at this point.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
This two-line poem, The Wolf Moon, has the proper formatting and brings the theme of lone wolf and moonlight into the expanding renga format at this point.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
There is nothing more eerie than a wolf howl on a full moon night. I like this idea for a Renga book. Very interesting format. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
There is nothing more eerie than a wolf howl on a full moon night. I like this idea for a Renga book. Very interesting format. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Sugarray77
I love your focus on the wolf and the dramatic way he is howling. I can hear him in my mind as he communicates with the others. Well done and thanks so much for all you do with the Clubs you oversee. Hugs!
Melissa
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
I love your focus on the wolf and the dramatic way he is howling. I can hear him in my mind as he communicates with the others. Well done and thanks so much for all you do with the Clubs you oversee. Hugs!
Melissa
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
love that pic! can't wait to use it for the haiku event!
this was a great two-line renga as the wolf moon awakens the new year's passion...
smooth flow
and great imagery
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
love that pic! can't wait to use it for the haiku event!
this was a great two-line renga as the wolf moon awakens the new year's passion...
smooth flow
and great imagery
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊