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Try a Smile

a 5-7-5

3 total reviews 
Comment from Sugarray77
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Hi Chris... I love this upbeat and lighthearted poem. The yellow also sets the scene for a sunny and happy verse. Well done and thanks for the smile... now I'll give one to you :)

Melissa

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
    Hi Melissa Thank you and yes a smile is often nice to give and receive do sending one to you too
    Cheers Chris
Comment from Jacqueline1616
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Love the picture to go with the words, perfect. Yes, it really is that easy.
It sorta reminds me of how, when working with people, or doing customer service... Regardless of your mood that day, you have to paste on a smile and put your best into it. Even if you have to "fake it to make it". But somehow, smiling goes from the outside and works in and next thing you know you are feeling happier.
Great job. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
    Hi Jacqeuline Thank you for your review and comments
    Cheers
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is a cute poem and presentation for the contest. People need to take your advice. Soke seem to never smile. I had a nickname once Perpetual Smiler. I always smile. Excellent syllables, topic, and image, Chriisy!

Best wishes, Alex

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2025
    Hi Alex
    Many Thanks and yes doesn't take much to smile always brighten a day Cheers