Peace
A poem about Peace87 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This poem addresses the often visible conflicts in the world. The news can be depressing to watch or read about, and if it is in our own town or neighborhood, we are going to be affected. We could probably all work on eliminating 'Cluttering of our minds' in more than one way. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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This poem addresses the often visible conflicts in the world. The news can be depressing to watch or read about, and if it is in our own town or neighborhood, we are going to be affected. We could probably all work on eliminating 'Cluttering of our minds' in more than one way. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much Crystie for your kind words and review. I truly appreciate that!
Comment from shelley kaye
it's only going to get worse now... :-(
a great, thought-provoking poem
smooth flow, rhyme, and line connection
i liked the "another ambulance another victim" part -
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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it's only going to get worse now... :-(
a great, thought-provoking poem
smooth flow, rhyme, and line connection
i liked the "another ambulance another victim" part -
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 21-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much Shelley for your kind review. I truly appreciate that!
Comment from Neonewman
This is an engaging piece, Harry. Truth all the way through. I'll never understand why peace isn't contagious. What a shame. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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This is an engaging piece, Harry. Truth all the way through. I'll never understand why peace isn't contagious. What a shame. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 18-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much Steve. I know right? What is so hard about it? I truly appreciate your review!
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My pleasure, Harry.
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Roger that!
Comment from rjuselius
Indeed. Greed seems to be the greatest virtue today. It is so sad because without an emphatetic atmosphere the world is doomed.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings with hugs and kisses!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Indeed. Greed seems to be the greatest virtue today. It is so sad because without an emphatetic atmosphere the world is doomed.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings with hugs and kisses!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 18-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much Rebekka. You are so right. I truly appreciate your kind review!!!
Comment from jaded831
Your poem reflects the feelings of most of us. There has always been a battle between good and evil. Only now we are more aware of it, because of news coverage. We are all collateral damage to the rich. You wrote a deep and powerful poem.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Your poem reflects the feelings of most of us. There has always been a battle between good and evil. Only now we are more aware of it, because of news coverage. We are all collateral damage to the rich. You wrote a deep and powerful poem.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Well, thank you so much. I truly appreciate your kind review!
Comment from CM Pickard
There's a heartfelt quality to this that, when added to the vivid imagery you've employed, makes it an emotional read. The rhyme is constant and for doesn't feel forced. A sense of urgency and sadness (or maybe a better word is despair) permeates through it. A timely poem that is relevant in any era. I don't think you need to change anything.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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There's a heartfelt quality to this that, when added to the vivid imagery you've employed, makes it an emotional read. The rhyme is constant and for doesn't feel forced. A sense of urgency and sadness (or maybe a better word is despair) permeates through it. A timely poem that is relevant in any era. I don't think you need to change anything.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much for your great review! I truly appreciate you and your kind words!!!
Comment from Teri7
Harry, This is a really great poem about peace! You used very good descriptive and very true words. If we would learn to use our mouth to speak kind and meaningful words we might see better things start to happen. It takes someone to be the one that will go that extra mile in what they say or do. I also think if we would pray and ask God for His help He would grace us with His presence and things would change. I believe that with my whole heart! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Harry, This is a really great poem about peace! You used very good descriptive and very true words. If we would learn to use our mouth to speak kind and meaningful words we might see better things start to happen. It takes someone to be the one that will go that extra mile in what they say or do. I also think if we would pray and ask God for His help He would grace us with His presence and things would change. I believe that with my whole heart! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much Teri. And yes, we all need to turn to God for the answer, but I do believe there is hope in the future as well. I truly appreciate your kind words and kind review!!!
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You are so right! We do have hope in Jesus Christ! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Iza Deleanu
"When will the words sweeten our tongue
When will the fighting cease?
So, we can all enjoy a greater peace: I guess this is the one million dollar question.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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"When will the words sweeten our tongue
When will the fighting cease?
So, we can all enjoy a greater peace: I guess this is the one million dollar question.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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Yes, I guess it is...
Comment from Nellys1983
I enjoyed reading this poem, the ABAB rhyming scheme made it a satisfying poem. And the message of peace is always a powerful message and one that should be heard. Well done
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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I enjoyed reading this poem, the ABAB rhyming scheme made it a satisfying poem. And the message of peace is always a powerful message and one that should be heard. Well done
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much for the kind review. I really appreciate that!
Comment from Lana Marie
This is a very somber poem that reflects how our world has become. I tend to not get caught up in everything that's going on, but try to be the best that God has created me to be to the people around me. Nice job.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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This is a very somber poem that reflects how our world has become. I tend to not get caught up in everything that's going on, but try to be the best that God has created me to be to the people around me. Nice job.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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Well, thank you Lana for your kind review. I really appreciate that! And yes, that is all we can do is be the best that we can be.
