BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 64 "Howling at Midnight"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
3 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I am so happy you contributed to the Renga Book. It's an excellent chapter. The poem has the right composition. Beautiful presentation and imagery. Good syllables and connection between lines.
gypsy
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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I am so happy you contributed to the Renga Book. It's an excellent chapter. The poem has the right composition. Beautiful presentation and imagery. Good syllables and connection between lines.
gypsy
Comment Written 03-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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hi gypsy, thank you for having this Renga book so that I can contribute to it. thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Dove. Your short, but effective verse gives me chills. The setting, the artwork, the invoking of deep, dark midnight all combine to set a creepy tone. Great job with this form.
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Hello Dove. Your short, but effective verse gives me chills. The setting, the artwork, the invoking of deep, dark midnight all combine to set a creepy tone. Great job with this form.
Melissa
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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HI Melissa, thank you for your comments and review. dove
Comment from patcelaw
This is well written and I enjoyed reading it. I would only have one suggestion for you and that would be that you would make your font a large larger size so that it fits across the page right and it's easier for the visually impaired to read.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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This is well written and I enjoyed reading it. I would only have one suggestion for you and that would be that you would make your font a large larger size so that it fits across the page right and it's easier for the visually impaired to read.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Hi Patricia, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
