BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 60 "Owls"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
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Comment from jaded831
Those eyes sent chills through me. The poem stands alone, as an owl in motion descending on its prey. But the picture adds to the magic you created. Together they are awesome.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Those eyes sent chills through me. The poem stands alone, as an owl in motion descending on its prey. But the picture adds to the magic you created. Together they are awesome.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Jaded831,
Thank you for the great review. That owl could give a person a nightmare.
Cecilia
Comment from Sugarray77
Oh my, what a photograph that you chose to use, Cecilia. It scares me because he looks like he's flying right at me. Your verse supports this oh so spooky poem. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Oh my, what a photograph that you chose to use, Cecilia. It scares me because he looks like he's flying right at me. Your verse supports this oh so spooky poem. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Melissa,
Thank you for the wonderful review. That owl is scary looking.
Cecilia
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I love the photo of this owl in full flight, Cecilia, after patiently waiting to see its next meal. I think they are gorgeous creatures and you've shown their place in nature well in this 5-7-5 poem. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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I love the photo of this owl in full flight, Cecilia, after patiently waiting to see its next meal. I think they are gorgeous creatures and you've shown their place in nature well in this 5-7-5 poem. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Valda,
Thank you for the great review. Yes, the owl is on a mission. Happy New Year my friend.
Cecilia
Comment from royowen
Birds of prey are cleverly designed to hunt and kill their source of food, the amazing thing about nature is that God designed it perfectly to fit its micro connections and facilitate all survival, only man interferes with that balance, beautifully written Cecilia, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Birds of prey are cleverly designed to hunt and kill their source of food, the amazing thing about nature is that God designed it perfectly to fit its micro connections and facilitate all survival, only man interferes with that balance, beautifully written Cecilia, blessings Roy
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Roy,
Thank you for the great review. Yes, God created them to survive on their own. He provides us with beauty everyday.
Have a Happy New Year
Cecilia
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He does.
Comment from Darlene BoClair
I like the owl and how the creature hunts for his prey. For nature does provide the food.
Nature is a great way to write poetry. Thanks for being a nature lover.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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I like the owl and how the creature hunts for his prey. For nature does provide the food.
Nature is a great way to write poetry. Thanks for being a nature lover.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Darlene,
Thank you for the great review. I find nature peaceful even when it's storming. I love a good thunderstorm.
Cecilia
Comment from Nicki.B
What a beautiful owl! I wrote a Lune on Owls recently such fabulous creatures.
This is great poem of nature, the Owl prowls and swooshes in for the kill. Nicely put!!
Well done, Nicki xox
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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What a beautiful owl! I wrote a Lune on Owls recently such fabulous creatures.
This is great poem of nature, the Owl prowls and swooshes in for the kill. Nicely put!!
Well done, Nicki xox
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Nicki,
Thank you for the wonderful review. Yes, Owls are majestic creatures. I see them out where I live on occasion.
One morning about 630am I was on my back patio and there was an owl on one of the lower peaks of the house. I didn't know it was there all of a sudden I heard swoosh, swoosh as it flew over my head. Scared the snot right out of me.
Cecilia xoxo
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello,
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
The presentation is great.
Good renga poem composition and flow.
Great entry for the renga book.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Hello,
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
The presentation is great.
Good renga poem composition and flow.
Great entry for the renga book.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Gypsy,
Thank you for the great review. I do appreciate you helping me with this. I appreciate you.
Cecilia
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
That is an amazing photograph and your words brought this owl to life here Cecilia, these are magnificent, majestic birds and I love the sound they make too, as it is comforting at night, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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That is an amazing photograph and your words brought this owl to life here Cecilia, these are magnificent, majestic birds and I love the sound they make too, as it is comforting at night, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Dolly,
Thank you for the amazing review. I love the sound of the owls hooting at night. We have one around here every so often. When he is around I had to worry about Angel and my other dog Sasha. They both weighed around 18-20 lbs not even sure if he could pick them up. Now I just need to worry about Sasha who is the fatty. She's a pug.
I saw that picture and I knew it was perfect for this poem.
Cecilia
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
That's a wicked looking owl coming in for the kill. This is a good poem describing his hunting skills. I had an injured Great Horned Owl grab a kitten out of my five-year old's hands. Mama cat saved her kitten by jumping on the owl. When we realized how badly he was injured, it took me two days to get help for him. I love animals also. Sometimes they are kinder than friends.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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That's a wicked looking owl coming in for the kill. This is a good poem describing his hunting skills. I had an injured Great Horned Owl grab a kitten out of my five-year old's hands. Mama cat saved her kitten by jumping on the owl. When we realized how badly he was injured, it took me two days to get help for him. I love animals also. Sometimes they are kinder than friends.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Carol,
Thank you for the wonderful review. That must have been a scary sight seeing that owl grab that kitten. They are majestic animals that's for sure.
I agree about animals they love you unconditionally.
Cecilia
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It was even scarier when the mother jumped on the owl's back. It dropped the kitten but she was a good twenty feet off the ground when she jumped. She limped around for a couple of days.
Comment from Charles D Ezell
Among the Choctaw belief, the sign of the owl means trouble or death. I am with you, it means wisdom to me and enjoy calling them at night during the mating season.Good post.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Among the Choctaw belief, the sign of the owl means trouble or death. I am with you, it means wisdom to me and enjoy calling them at night during the mating season.Good post.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Charles,
Thank you for the great review. I can see why the Choctaw believe that. It never ends well for their prey. :)
Have a Happy New Year my friend.
Cecilia
