Bells
Joybell poem11 total reviews
Comment from Nicki.B
This is so cool, a bell shaped poem. What a fabulous idea.
I love what you have done with it, looks brilliant.
Happy New Year to You and Yours!!!
Best Wishes
Nicki x
This is so cool, a bell shaped poem. What a fabulous idea.
I love what you have done with it, looks brilliant.
Happy New Year to You and Yours!!!
Best Wishes
Nicki x
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very good artwork and nice presentation.
-You did a good job with the form and topic.
-Effective imagery describes the bells and
creates a peaceful, happy feeling as they do.
-Good concluding lines.
-Very well done, and have a great New Year.
-Very good artwork and nice presentation.
-You did a good job with the form and topic.
-Effective imagery describes the bells and
creates a peaceful, happy feeling as they do.
-Good concluding lines.
-Very well done, and have a great New Year.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your joybell shape poem, Santha! I liked how you included both the beginning of the new and the end of the old in the poem. I hope you have a very happy and healthy New Year!!
Great job with your joybell shape poem, Santha! I liked how you included both the beginning of the new and the end of the old in the poem. I hope you have a very happy and healthy New Year!!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nice poem for the club. I enjoyed listening to it very much. May you have a wonderful day? May you also have a very happy new year and may God richly bless you. Patricia.
This is a very nice poem for the club. I enjoyed listening to it very much. May you have a wonderful day? May you also have a very happy new year and may God richly bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
Comment from l.raven
Hi Sanku, it's time to ring in the new year (2025)
my sweet friend...and say goodbye too (2024) last
year...bring in peace and health throughout the
world...
I love you poem sweet girl...and I love the shape...
very well written...picture perfect...love you...Linda xxoo
Hi Sanku, it's time to ring in the new year (2025)
my sweet friend...and say goodbye too (2024) last
year...bring in peace and health throughout the
world...
I love you poem sweet girl...and I love the shape...
very well written...picture perfect...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Absolutely, we say goodbye to one year and welcome a new one and hope that we enjoy another year on earth in peace. I feel as thrilled as you to welcome in 2025, Happy New Year to you, love Dolly x x x
Absolutely, we say goodbye to one year and welcome a new one and hope that we enjoy another year on earth in peace. I feel as thrilled as you to welcome in 2025, Happy New Year to you, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
Comment from Darlene BoClair
I like how bells sound from the top of the church. Bells exemplify the time of each hour of the day.
The hour for the beginning and ending we can embrace for 2025. Happy New Year!
I like how bells sound from the top of the church. Bells exemplify the time of each hour of the day.
The hour for the beginning and ending we can embrace for 2025. Happy New Year!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
One of my favorite things about living in Germany was the church bells. I loved listening to them. We don't have church bells in the US. At least not in any of the areas, I've lived in. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us.
One of my favorite things about living in Germany was the church bells. I loved listening to them. We don't have church bells in the US. At least not in any of the areas, I've lived in. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
Comment from jaded831
Holding onto yesterday, is fine, but the New Year should have new beginnings. They say remember the past, with all the mistakes, so we don't repeat them. Sound advice creatively weaved into your beautiful poem.
Holding onto yesterday, is fine, but the New Year should have new beginnings. They say remember the past, with all the mistakes, so we don't repeat them. Sound advice creatively weaved into your beautiful poem.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Sanku,
What a beautiful poem. Another year almost at an end and a new one beginning and the bells can ring the old out and the new in.
Well done
Cecilia
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Sanku,
What a beautiful poem. Another year almost at an end and a new one beginning and the bells can ring the old out and the new in.
Well done
Cecilia
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Comment Written 30-Dec-2024