Past, Present and Future
A Choka poem for the Japanese Club10 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I wrote in my final page of my 366 journal that I wouldn't look back on the past twelve months as mistakes I made can't be undone, emotions already shed. As you say, beautifully, June let the future unfold as our gift to self, one day at a time. Lovely write, cheers
Valda
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I wrote in my final page of my 366 journal that I wouldn't look back on the past twelve months as mistakes I made can't be undone, emotions already shed. As you say, beautifully, June let the future unfold as our gift to self, one day at a time. Lovely write, cheers
Valda
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Beautiful artwork and nice presentation, June.
-You wrote a very good poem.
-Good opening lines establish the premise.
-A good message about leaving the
unpleasant things behind, not dwelling on them.
-You make a good point about
"letting the future unfold."
-It is important to "embrace the present."
-A very good closing line, as well.
-You did a good job with the poem and style.
-Have a great 2025.
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-Beautiful artwork and nice presentation, June.
-You wrote a very good poem.
-Good opening lines establish the premise.
-A good message about leaving the
unpleasant things behind, not dwelling on them.
-You make a good point about
"letting the future unfold."
-It is important to "embrace the present."
-A very good closing line, as well.
-You did a good job with the poem and style.
-Have a great 2025.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
Comment from lyenochka
Amen! I agree! That's how we must try to view the future "with an open heart
and embracing the present ~" and I like the two meanings of "present" which moves us to the "gift" in the last line. Happy New Year, June!!
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Amen! I agree! That's how we must try to view the future "with an open heart
and embracing the present ~" and I like the two meanings of "present" which moves us to the "gift" in the last line. Happy New Year, June!!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely written for the club event and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you a very happy new year and may God bless you with measures of blessings beyond your comprehension.
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This is very nicely written for the club event and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you a very happy new year and may God bless you with measures of blessings beyond your comprehension.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
Comment from kahpot
Mistakes and regrets should be left behind, we should learn from them and move on in a better direction, a very uplifting poem and message, very well written and presented****kahpot
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Mistakes and regrets should be left behind, we should learn from them and move on in a better direction, a very uplifting poem and message, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love your attitude and mindset in this uplifting New Year resolution poem. We cannot change the past, we need to appreciate the present as we don't know what the future holds. Living in the moment is the only way to truly be content. I enjoyed your fine words June, Happy New Year to you and your family, love Dolly x
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I love your attitude and mindset in this uplifting New Year resolution poem. We cannot change the past, we need to appreciate the present as we don't know what the future holds. Living in the moment is the only way to truly be content. I enjoyed your fine words June, Happy New Year to you and your family, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
Comment from Darlene BoClair
I like your personal year end review. This choka is so inspiring and a reminder to count all our blessings as a gift. A gift of all lifetime.
Happy New Year!
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I like your personal year end review. This choka is so inspiring and a reminder to count all our blessings as a gift. A gift of all lifetime.
Happy New Year!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
Comment from royowen
The thing I love about fanstory the most, is that I can go back through my posts and although I recognise my writing mostly, it's not always the case, and it can be I'm reading it for the first time, well done. Blessings Roy
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The thing I love about fanstory the most, is that I can go back through my posts and although I recognise my writing mostly, it's not always the case, and it can be I'm reading it for the first time, well done. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
Comment from Sugarray77
Well said, dear June. The message is loud and clear. Forgive yourself and move on..... be grateful and learn from your mistakes.... And move on. The present is a gift to enjoy. A wonderful poem!!
Melissa.
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Well said, dear June. The message is loud and clear. Forgive yourself and move on..... be grateful and learn from your mistakes.... And move on. The present is a gift to enjoy. A wonderful poem!!
Melissa.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
June,
This is a great poem for years end. Soon we leave 2024 and see what 2025 holds for us. The picture captures the essence of the poem.
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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June,
This is a great poem for years end. Soon we leave 2024 and see what 2025 holds for us. The picture captures the essence of the poem.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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I'm happy this choka poem resonated with you. Thank you for sharing your insights. Much appreciated.
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You're welcome. I keep telling you your brilliant.
