Senses
Free Writing6 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
This is a lovely reminder to just breathe and let your senses take over. Embrace the moment and feel the joy manifested in the world of creation. It's the best therapy for stress.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
This is a lovely reminder to just breathe and let your senses take over. Embrace the moment and feel the joy manifested in the world of creation. It's the best therapy for stress.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I felt the moment in your poem about living in the now Kayte. We should pay more attention to our senses so that we do not miss anything as life is short, I enjoyed the sentiment here, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
I felt the moment in your poem about living in the now Kayte. We should pay more attention to our senses so that we do not miss anything as life is short, I enjoyed the sentiment here, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Thank you
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nicely written poem, depicting the senses of human beings and I very much enjoyed listening to it. It flows very well when it is read aloud your presentation is good. May you have a wonderful day and may you ever have a very happy new year. Patricia
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
This is a very nicely written poem, depicting the senses of human beings and I very much enjoyed listening to it. It flows very well when it is read aloud your presentation is good. May you have a wonderful day and may you ever have a very happy new year. Patricia
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you
Comment from kahpot
Wonderful, yes, we should all take time to take in the wonders that surround us every day, the sounds and movement of nature are amazing,
very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
Wonderful, yes, we should all take time to take in the wonders that surround us every day, the sounds and movement of nature are amazing,
very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Kayte,
This is a beautiful poem. I like the rhyme scheme you used. I have never thought of one like this. Did you make it up or does it have a name?
Great job
Cecilia
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
Kayte,
This is a beautiful poem. I like the rhyme scheme you used. I have never thought of one like this. Did you make it up or does it have a name?
Great job
Cecilia
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Im not sure if it has a name. This one just came to me. Thank you for the thoughtful review
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You're welcome
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Kayte,
This is a well done poem using repetition well to show praise for and thanks to God for family during the holidays and life. It could almost be a psalm.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
Joan
P S I would like you to know that I recently published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page it you are interested. If this is a repeat I am sorry.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
Hi Kayte,
This is a well done poem using repetition well to show praise for and thanks to God for family during the holidays and life. It could almost be a psalm.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
Joan
P S I would like you to know that I recently published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page it you are interested. If this is a repeat I am sorry.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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thanks for the thoughtful review and the information about your book I will look it up. I look forward to reading. Thanks for the rating. Six stars is such a comment. Thank you so much
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You are most kindly welcome. Thanks for your interest in my book. Can't wait to hear what you think of it.
Joan