My modelling career
A 5-Line Poem12 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Is that a personal photo?
-A good presentation to go with it.
-Good play on words with "model fellow."
-I like the line beginning "he walked...."
-A good concluding line.
-Obviously, this wasn't meant to be
your calling. A story about how
this took place could be interesting reading.
-A very good entry; good luck, and have
a great 2025!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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-Is that a personal photo?
-A good presentation to go with it.
-Good play on words with "model fellow."
-I like the line beginning "he walked...."
-A good concluding line.
-Obviously, this wasn't meant to be
your calling. A story about how
this took place could be interesting reading.
-A very good entry; good luck, and have
a great 2025!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, yes, that is me, many years ago, tis poem was just reminiscing and a bit of fun, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are very welcome and thanks for the information about the picture. It is a good one. It's always good to have a "bit of fun!"
Have a great New Year, too.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nicely written five line poem and I enjoyed listening to it very much. It flows very well when it is ready aloud. May you have a wonderful new year and may God bless you with good health, prosperity and faith. Patricia.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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This is a very nicely written five line poem and I enjoyed listening to it very much. It flows very well when it is ready aloud. May you have a wonderful new year and may God bless you with good health, prosperity and faith. Patricia.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Patricia, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
This five-line poem, My Modeling Career, has the proper formatting and recalls a painful memory of the big shot ending in a big fall. Oh, the pain of an accident in youth that changed your career course.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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This five-line poem, My Modeling Career, has the proper formatting and recalls a painful memory of the big shot ending in a big fall. Oh, the pain of an accident in youth that changed your career course.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Bill, no not what I would call a career, bit of mucking around I think, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
As a Model, you have to develop a thick skin and be able to rise above criticism and be prepared to sell your soul to the Devil for money, if you cry and run home there is no work for you. You captured the essence of this kind of work here, I enjoyed it, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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As a Model, you have to develop a thick skin and be able to rise above criticism and be prepared to sell your soul to the Devil for money, if you cry and run home there is no work for you. You captured the essence of this kind of work here, I enjoyed it, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Dolly, yes, it was what I call a very bitchy scene, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Darlene BoClair
I like the title of your five line poem. The title got my attention and I wanted to read.
I like how you shared the life of modeling with it's less ups and more downs. Indeed modeling is challenging.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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I like the title of your five line poem. The title got my attention and I wanted to read.
I like how you shared the life of modeling with it's less ups and more downs. Indeed modeling is challenging.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Kahpot,
This is an awesome five line poem. You set your model up to fail. My luck I would have fallen on my face. Not sure how these women walk on some of the heels they wear.
Great job
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Kahpot,
This is an awesome five line poem. You set your model up to fail. My luck I would have fallen on my face. Not sure how these women walk on some of the heels they wear.
Great job
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You're welcome
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Fateful evening? Tell us more. I tried modeling one for shoes, but being 6'6" the photographer couldn't frame my face and the shoes they asked me to wear unless they used a longer lens which caused me to lose my identity. "-O
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Fateful evening? Tell us more. I tried modeling one for shoes, but being 6'6" the photographer couldn't frame my face and the shoes they asked me to wear unless they used a longer lens which caused me to lose my identity. "-O
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you,Tom, a 6' 6" they would have been big shoes as well, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
Happens to the best of us. Never tried to be a model myself - wasn't thin like Twiggy. But I did like wearing mod clothes, lol Enjoyed your bit of fun here. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Happens to the best of us. Never tried to be a model myself - wasn't thin like Twiggy. But I did like wearing mod clothes, lol Enjoyed your bit of fun here. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from royowen
This seems like a wonderful five line poem, and excellent piece of artwork, I'll bet that's you when perhaps you were a little bit younger and attractive the female gender, well done Kahpot, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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This seems like a wonderful five line poem, and excellent piece of artwork, I'll bet that's you when perhaps you were a little bit younger and attractive the female gender, well done Kahpot, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Roy, and yes, but more than a little bit younger, and after that I think the girls thought I was clumsy, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Well done
Comment from Wendy G
Lol. Well, maybe you just weren't meant to be a model, although I sympathise with your embarrassment and distress. A fine five-liner, and I hope you do well in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Lol. Well, maybe you just weren't meant to be a model, although I sympathise with your embarrassment and distress. A fine five-liner, and I hope you do well in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, yes, a bit of an experience, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
