The Mount
A sermon by the Lord.28 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The words are outstanding as they give those reading a beautiful
message. The poem is educating, descriptive and creative. I agree with
the author prayer many times is talking to God. The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words
well. Great Poem, Willie!
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The words are outstanding as they give those reading a beautiful
message. The poem is educating, descriptive and creative. I agree with
the author prayer many times is talking to God. The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words
well. Great Poem, Willie!
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent artwork to accompany your beautiful poem with a powerful message. We all need to remember that God loves us so much that he sent his only Son to save us.
We can talk to Him at any time and any where. How comforting to know.
Blessings
Janet
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Excellent artwork to accompany your beautiful poem with a powerful message. We all need to remember that God loves us so much that he sent his only Son to save us.
We can talk to Him at any time and any where. How comforting to know.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
Comment from Charles D Ezell
Praise Him with every breath after all it is His breath we breath, He blew the breath of life into man. Love Him with a pure heart. Well done with this.. Thanks for sharing our Lord.
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Praise Him with every breath after all it is His breath we breath, He blew the breath of life into man. Love Him with a pure heart. Well done with this.. Thanks for sharing our Lord.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Willie P. I love the realism in your poem and how that you accurately state that we can talk to God in a realistic way. He created us and sees our heart, so he knows the truth anyway. Well said and well written.
Melissa
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Hello Willie P. I love the realism in your poem and how that you accurately state that we can talk to God in a realistic way. He created us and sees our heart, so he knows the truth anyway. Well said and well written.
Melissa
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
Comment from Lana Marie
This is a good reminder to those that don't realize that they can just talk to God like we talk to each other. I remember when I first learned this 40 years ago and it changed my life. I enjoyed your poem and the rhyming's throughout.
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This is a good reminder to those that don't realize that they can just talk to God like we talk to each other. I remember when I first learned this 40 years ago and it changed my life. I enjoyed your poem and the rhyming's throughout.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
Comment from Brenda Strauser
This is a beautiful poem. The words you used describe Jesus so well. The rhyming is good. Well written. I enjoyed reading this poem.
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This is a beautiful poem. The words you used describe Jesus so well. The rhyming is good. Well written. I enjoyed reading this poem.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
Comment from rjuselius
This is a beautifully written piece of spiritual poetry dear Willie! I thoroughly enjoyed your poem.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings with hugs and kisses!
Rebekka x
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This is a beautifully written piece of spiritual poetry dear Willie! I thoroughly enjoyed your poem.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings with hugs and kisses!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
Comment from Darlene BoClair
Praise God in your poetry. You write truth and power of the Spirit in each word and line you write.
God do it for all in your sermons and scriptures. Thanks for being my God representative in prayer today. God bless our private talks with you.
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Praise God in your poetry. You write truth and power of the Spirit in each word and line you write.
God do it for all in your sermons and scriptures. Thanks for being my God representative in prayer today. God bless our private talks with you.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
Comment from Tom Horonzy
And yet verbosity is often heard from pulpits wherever i go trying to make believe the person speaking has over-acheived.
It good to see you writing again. I haven't reviewed anything ofyours in a long while.
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And yet verbosity is often heard from pulpits wherever i go trying to make believe the person speaking has over-acheived.
It good to see you writing again. I haven't reviewed anything ofyours in a long while.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Willie.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a very good poem
with effective imagery and rhyme.
-You also tell a good story.
-A very good opening verse,
followed by a question the
disciple answers.
-You do a good job showing
the paths that Jesus took
teaching the people as he went.
-Very good closing lines that
Jesus can still be in our lives
if that is the path we choose.
-Very well done.
-Thanks for sharing everything.
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Willie.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a very good poem
with effective imagery and rhyme.
-You also tell a good story.
-A very good opening verse,
followed by a question the
disciple answers.
-You do a good job showing
the paths that Jesus took
teaching the people as he went.
-Very good closing lines that
Jesus can still be in our lives
if that is the path we choose.
-Very well done.
-Thanks for sharing everything.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
