Haiku (creatures of the ark)
A Haiku for the club challenge12 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Kym,
The picture is perfect for your haiku. Thank you for participating in the haiku club. Excellent haiku composition and syllables count.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Hello, Kym,
The picture is perfect for your haiku. Thank you for participating in the haiku club. Excellent haiku composition and syllables count.
Gypsy
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, a happy new year to you, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Creatures of the Ark, has the proper formatting and finds the animals. which are the future of the washed-out world getting a sip of water before proceeding.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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This haiku, Creatures of the Ark, has the proper formatting and finds the animals. which are the future of the washed-out world getting a sip of water before proceeding.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
Monkey swings are just the thing to keep animals bored with being cooped up together for 40 days occupied at the crowded water hole! Very clever response to the club chsllenge!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Monkey swings are just the thing to keep animals bored with being cooped up together for 40 days occupied at the crowded water hole! Very clever response to the club chsllenge!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your understanding comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from patcelaw
This is where I work for the club and I enjoyed listening to it. Your color contrast is not very good for people who have vision problems so you might want to see if you could change that a bit. Patricia.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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This is where I work for the club and I enjoyed listening to it. Your color contrast is not very good for people who have vision problems so you might want to see if you could change that a bit. Patricia.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Patricia, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Sugarray77
Hey Kim, so your active word is 'queue'. I like it.. it is certainly unique that animals would stand in line, but hey, it's your poem :). I also swung on the monkey swings over a water hole... river... thanks for a fun read.
Melissa
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Hey Kim, so your active word is 'queue'. I like it.. it is certainly unique that animals would stand in line, but hey, it's your poem :). I also swung on the monkey swings over a water hole... river... thanks for a fun read.
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Melissa, actually I thought the monkey was pretty active,
wasn't that fun, swinging into the water, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from royowen
I love the idea of monkey swings and the idea of the last puddle, although I don't think they'd actually seen rain before the flood, the firmament above opened, up, beautifully written Kahpot, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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I love the idea of monkey swings and the idea of the last puddle, although I don't think they'd actually seen rain before the flood, the firmament above opened, up, beautifully written Kahpot, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Roy, I loved jumping into the river from a length of rope that was tied to the tree limb, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Bless you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You captures the scene from the famous biblical story here and I saw those animals entering the ark two by two, this is a magical post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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You captures the scene from the famous biblical story here and I saw those animals entering the ark two by two, this is a magical post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Dolly, for your exceptional comments, and six stars, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Kahpot,
This is such a wonderful haiku. Showing all the animals that were on the ark. The monkey swings is fantastic. The picture compliments the poem.
Well done.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Kahpot,
This is such a wonderful haiku. Showing all the animals that were on the ark. The monkey swings is fantastic. The picture compliments the poem.
Well done.
Cecilia
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Cecilia, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You're welcome.
Comment from Mark D. R.
I had never heard of 'monkey swings.' But your Haiku note explains your memory.
Nicely written poem for this club entry. Do like, especially, the illustration that your paired with your post.
First line gets high praise as a phrase.
Mark
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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I had never heard of 'monkey swings.' But your Haiku note explains your memory.
Nicely written poem for this club entry. Do like, especially, the illustration that your paired with your post.
First line gets high praise as a phrase.
Mark
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Mark, well I reckon you missed out on some fun there, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I owe you more than one review for the kindness you often show with my renderings, but haikus are rarely my cup of tea. They test my mental acuity to understand the fullness of the message intended. Write on! I am with you in spirit.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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I owe you more than one review for the kindness you often show with my renderings, but haikus are rarely my cup of tea. They test my mental acuity to understand the fullness of the message intended. Write on! I am with you in spirit.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Love your honesty, Thank you, Tom, yes, sometimes it is hard, I have read many works that I do not connect with, please don't feel bad if you do not review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
