BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 59 "Willow Trees Over the Pond"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
12 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This two-line poem, Willow Trees Over the Pond, has the proper formatting and focuses on the scene of shaded areas with filtered light through it all. Neat.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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This two-line poem, Willow Trees Over the Pond, has the proper formatting and focuses on the scene of shaded areas with filtered light through it all. Neat.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this next addition to the poetry book progression. This is a wonderful addition and the image these words formed in my mind is beautiful.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you for sharing this next addition to the poetry book progression. This is a wonderful addition and the image these words formed in my mind is beautiful.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from patcelaw
The wording and this is very well done and your presentation is beautiful because it matches what your words are saying. I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best for the day. May God bless you and give you a very happy new year.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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The wording and this is very well done and your presentation is beautiful because it matches what your words are saying. I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best for the day. May God bless you and give you a very happy new year.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Gypsy. I like this one and I especially like how your words are shadows of your chosen artwork. They match beautifully. Enjoyable read.
Melissa
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Hello Gypsy. I like this one and I especially like how your words are shadows of your chosen artwork. They match beautifully. Enjoyable read.
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Gypsy,
This is a wonderful Renga poem. Like how you have the sunlight caressing the water. I have not done a Renga poem. I am still too much of a rookie to try. My muse likes to take of on me.
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Gypsy,
This is a wonderful Renga poem. Like how you have the sunlight caressing the water. I have not done a Renga poem. I am still too much of a rookie to try. My muse likes to take of on me.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Give it a try. You can send it to me and I can give you feedback before you post. Just a thought.
Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
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I will try it. Practice makes perfect.
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I know you can do it and I can help you.
Gypsy 😊
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Is there a theme? I'll write one of each and send it to you in the morning.
Comment from shelley kaye
love weeping willow trees for some reason... they're so cool to look at...
this was a great add to morning mist one
flows smoothly . . . like the watery cascade. . .
with nice imagery. . .
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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love weeping willow trees for some reason... they're so cool to look at...
this was a great add to morning mist one
flows smoothly . . . like the watery cascade. . .
with nice imagery. . .
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Nice addition to your Renga collaboration. It is a good follow up to the koi poem.
Good phrasing throughout! Do like your illustrations for this contribution.
Mark
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Gypsy,
Nice addition to your Renga collaboration. It is a good follow up to the koi poem.
Good phrasing throughout! Do like your illustrations for this contribution.
Mark
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
I love the thought of sunrays dancing and cascading over the willows, and sensually caressing the water as it ripples its approval, that is wonderful expressed, Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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I love the thought of sunrays dancing and cascading over the willows, and sensually caressing the water as it ripples its approval, that is wonderful expressed, Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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thank you
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Welcome
Comment from kahpot
Willow trees are grand, there were on the riverbanks when I was younger,
and so great to see them when passing on the river boats, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Willow trees are grand, there were on the riverbanks when I was younger,
and so great to see them when passing on the river boats, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Lana Marie
I like this. Growing up, I lived by someone who had a willow tree and it was always so fun to run over to their yard and swing on the low hanging branches. This poem is lovely and brought me back to my childhood.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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I like this. Growing up, I lived by someone who had a willow tree and it was always so fun to run over to their yard and swing on the low hanging branches. This poem is lovely and brought me back to my childhood.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
