Ever, the Sea
poem ~ 10 or less7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This less-than-ten-words-poem, Ever the Sea, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that power is defined by the force and relentlessness of the oceans movements.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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This less-than-ten-words-poem, Ever the Sea, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that power is defined by the force and relentlessness of the oceans movements.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you Bill!!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I am unsure whether your words alone would have earned you an extra star but with the selected picture chosen I became inspired as well as mesmerized. Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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I am unsure whether your words alone would have earned you an extra star but with the selected picture chosen I became inspired as well as mesmerized. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you Tom!!
Comment from RodG
I envy those who live near the sea and can witness endless scenes involving waves, wind, and surf both night and day. You capture that mesmerizing movement in this very short poem. Rod
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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I envy those who live near the sea and can witness endless scenes involving waves, wind, and surf both night and day. You capture that mesmerizing movement in this very short poem. Rod
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Thank you Rod!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The sea tirelessly makes waves on the shore with its lapping, swirling currents, I enjoyed your lively words to remind us of the sea shore here, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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The sea tirelessly makes waves on the shore with its lapping, swirling currents, I enjoyed your lively words to remind us of the sea shore here, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from patcelaw
Sometimes he can be a very dangerous place with all of its movement. I enjoyed your tenor hard or less poem and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a lovely day and may God bless you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Sometimes he can be a very dangerous place with all of its movement. I enjoyed your tenor hard or less poem and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a lovely day and may God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great under ten poem. The words portray the oceans power. If you listen and watch the ocean you can read it. Warning signs are place for a reason.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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This is a great under ten poem. The words portray the oceans power. If you listen and watch the ocean you can read it. Warning signs are place for a reason.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Thanks so much!
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You're welcome
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Thank you Roy!!
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You're welcome
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, forever in motion, so enticing yet can be so dangerous, spectacular, yet so calm, the sea is a wonderous thing, very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Excellent, forever in motion, so enticing yet can be so dangerous, spectacular, yet so calm, the sea is a wonderous thing, very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Thanks Kim!!
