Belong!
Sinners may pray for forgiveness.2 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great under ten poem. The message of the words if very powerful.
"Gods love is strong" He will never forsake us. You just have to believe, he is waiting for all his children.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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This is a great under ten poem. The message of the words if very powerful.
"Gods love is strong" He will never forsake us. You just have to believe, he is waiting for all his children.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Cecilia.
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello! What a wonderful verse for this 10 or less contest. You did a really good job in saying a lot with few words. I would mention that the first word is misspelled... it should read "though". It's an easy fix. Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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Hello! What a wonderful verse for this 10 or less contest. You did a really good job in saying a lot with few words. I would mention that the first word is misspelled... it should read "though". It's an easy fix. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
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So kind, Melissa. Misspelling corrected. Cheers!
