BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 58 "Morning Mist Rises"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I am so happy you contributed to the Renga Book. You always do such a good job. This one is an excellent chapter, very zen. The poem has the right composition. Beautiful presentation and imagery. Good syllables and connection between lines.
gypsy
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I am so happy you contributed to the Renga Book. You always do such a good job. This one is an excellent chapter, very zen. The poem has the right composition. Beautiful presentation and imagery. Good syllables and connection between lines.
gypsy
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello June. What a wonderful verse for this prompt. You did a really good job in saying a lot with few words. You always do such a good job with the short ones. :)
Melissa
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Hello June. What a wonderful verse for this prompt. You did a really good job in saying a lot with few words. You always do such a good job with the short ones. :)
Melissa
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
Comment from Mark D. R.
June,
Another nice entry for this Renga collaboration!
Had to verify that koi was the same for singular and plural. As such, methinks there was more than one koi in the pond.
However, are your bugs above or below the koi, or the morning mist?
Mark
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June,
Another nice entry for this Renga collaboration!
Had to verify that koi was the same for singular and plural. As such, methinks there was more than one koi in the pond.
However, are your bugs above or below the koi, or the morning mist?
Mark
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
