Hellitree
The battle between fire and Humitree20 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You are using these contests well, Lea. This is another fabulous part, and thanks to girlitree they are all saved from the flames. What a nightmare that must be. It makes you wonder if trees do feel pain. Another amazing picture! Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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You are using these contests well, Lea. This is another fabulous part, and thanks to girlitree they are all saved from the flames. What a nightmare that must be. It makes you wonder if trees do feel pain. Another amazing picture! Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Sandra again. I thank you so much. I think these might end up in a book poetry with a story, and I'll introduce other characters, and in this story.Yes the trees will feel pain. I think there might be fire people and water, people and soil, people and air people. I love making the pictures too.It's lots of fun and then forming the story around it. I'm pleased as punch that you are here, reading and offering your thoughts again.Happy new year and thank you!
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I love your ideas, Lea, and can't wait to meet the other characters. I wish I could create pictures as good as you can. I want to illustrate my childrens story books, but when I create on with AI, I can never keep the same face in different positions and doing different things. I think this year I'm going to have to try harder. Happy New Year, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Kayte Ray
this piece is written well. I love the flow of the work and the images that you present to the reader. The reader has a concrete picture from your words. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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this piece is written well. I love the flow of the work and the images that you present to the reader. The reader has a concrete picture from your words. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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I thank you again.That's so great of you! I'm happy you enjoy these. It is awesome to have a fellow writer. I like your work.That is true validation.Thank you for that too! Have an awesome New Year.
I hope it's a great one!
Comment from EILEEN LAW
Time. Rhyme. Bind. Find. Behind. It's difficult to have running rhymes like have successfully done. Keep up the good work
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Time. Rhyme. Bind. Find. Behind. It's difficult to have running rhymes like have successfully done. Keep up the good work
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Wow, I'm so privileged. Thank you so much for this great race. I'm truly happy you like it.It's an honor to receive! I hope that you have the most amazing new year.And it's the coming year, brings you nothing but joy and happiness! Thank you for your time and your great rating.In your kind words, thank you again.Have an awesome evening!
Comment from Douglas Goff
Oh my goodness what am interesting piece of poetry.
The yin and Yang of Fire and Water playing against each other in an EPI struggle is well constructed.
Nice. Very nice.
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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Oh my goodness what am interesting piece of poetry.
The yin and Yang of Fire and Water playing against each other in an EPI struggle is well constructed.
Nice. Very nice.
D
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Douglas, thank you very much.I'm so happy to see you here and receive your kind words.Great writing, and for your time most of all! I truly hope that your Christmas was grand and Happy New Year to you. And hope the new year brings you all that too.You need and full of happiness and joy!
Comment from Raul1
I have understood your poem and it is well written. It has no mistakes I can correct. You have picked the right words for the poetry. Good luck in the contest! Excellent work! I like it.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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I have understood your poem and it is well written. It has no mistakes I can correct. You have picked the right words for the poetry. Good luck in the contest! Excellent work! I like it.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Thank you for this fine compliment. Thank you for your great reading your encouraging remarks.And your time.Most of all this busy time of year. I hope that you had the best christmas and a mayor new year, bringing you much joy and happiness! Thank you again
Comment from MissMerri
Excellent rhyming and steady meter make this poem a pleasure to read.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Pondering your meaning... still.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Excellent rhyming and steady meter make this poem a pleasure to read.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Pondering your meaning... still.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Hi, thank you so much. I appreciate you stopping in for reading, offering your kind comments. The great rating and your time, most of of all. I'm so glad you liked it. This poem is part of a series, beginning with the mild, there is 5 of them. Now, it starts with your creation up to where they're running from a forest fire. So there is five poems all together.You're welcome to check them out if you wish or in my profile, it starts with the meld. Thank you so much again.I hope you had a wonderful christmas and that you have a great new year's too!
Comment from royowen
I like the idea of man and nature, or rather the creatorial connection between us, I guess the difference is being warm blooded or cold, but trees are a giver of life, and we are very dependent on the health of trees, beautifully written Lea, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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I like the idea of man and nature, or rather the creatorial connection between us, I guess the difference is being warm blooded or cold, but trees are a giver of life, and we are very dependent on the health of trees, beautifully written Lea, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Hi, roy.Thank you once again.I'm always happy to see you here! I'm thinking I might introduce them. Other characters to this theme. People seem to find it interesting. I think I'll test the waters for a couple other things too. Thank you again, thank you for your time. As always, I appreciate you and everything you have to say.I hope you have a wonderful new year!
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Most welcome Lea.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This contest entry is filled with creativity and strong words to evoke the best images in the minds of your readers. The rhyming scheme and flow are excellent. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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This contest entry is filled with creativity and strong words to evoke the best images in the minds of your readers. The rhyming scheme and flow are excellent. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Thank you again, Barbara. It's very much appreciated! Always happy to see you here. I'm glad you like this poem. I'm thinking about expanding on the theme a bit. Introducing other hybrids to the situation. Perhaps one that uh, they would find conflict with. We shall see, thank you again. I hope you have the most amazing New Year and appreciate your time to Which is i'm sure at a premium this time of year!
Comment from Sugarray77
What a wonderful verse for this Rhyming Poem contest. You did a really good job in saying a lot with a handful of words. The artwork is very dramatic and helps to set up the heat and burning feeling we get as we read. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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What a wonderful verse for this Rhyming Poem contest. You did a really good job in saying a lot with a handful of words. The artwork is very dramatic and helps to set up the heat and burning feeling we get as we read. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Hi Melissa! This is great that you like it voice. Pleases me so much. And someone likes my poetry, always that little piece of doubt inside chases you around until someone like yourself says they like it. So I appreciate that more than most people know. I also am thankful for your time and for your great rating.Too.And I wish you the best new year ever!
Comment from Ulla
Hi Lea, I must say that your imagination knows no bounds. The descriptions are manifold and the imagery is wonderful. They conjure up so many pictures before my eyes. A wonderful rhyming poem. Good luck. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Hi Lea, I must say that your imagination knows no bounds. The descriptions are manifold and the imagery is wonderful. They conjure up so many pictures before my eyes. A wonderful rhyming poem. Good luck. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Wow! What a fine compliment, thank you so much. I'm really super glad you like this! Pleased to see you here again.If you're fine comments in your awesome review and always your time, which is ever valuable.Thank you so much!
