Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

- love that solo bird flying through the sky
- great imagery of rippling rings of love
- smooth flow between the lines
- no spag or typos

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024

Thank you very much, 😊

Gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Great picture and I like the "rippling rings" of the water caused by the pine cones falling into the water. I wonder if the "love doves" are alluded to because of the rings they wear as part of their marriage vows?

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024

Yes, there's a connection between love doves and rings.

Thank you very much, big sister.

Love,

Marival

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Rings for love (lovers) what an excellent image your words give us, and the idyllic setting for them to meet, so peaceful and scenic, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊

Gypsy

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your poem has such a gentle flow to it. I really love how the falling pine cones create "rippling rings for love doves." It gives such a peaceful,
feeling. The way you wrote this is really special. It's a beautiful small moment that feels significant!

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊

Gypsy