A Long Day
one line poem8 total reviews
Comment from artisart4u
Yes, we can lose track of time especially when we are alone. So, having an interest, really helps out.
Your one-line poem is nice and so is your colorful picture.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Yes, we can lose track of time especially when we are alone. So, having an interest, really helps out.
Your one-line poem is nice and so is your colorful picture.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Dear artisart4u, thank you for your "six" and for your comments and review and good luck wishes. Happy New Year. Dove
Comment from Brenda Strauser
The poem is so interesting The picture is a good choice for the poem. Your words are so true. A day of work can be long enough. Have a Happy New Year.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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The poem is so interesting The picture is a good choice for the poem. Your words are so true. A day of work can be long enough. Have a Happy New Year.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Hi Brenda, thank you for your comments and review. Happy New Year to you too! Dove
Comment from June Sargent
Even when the clock is right, the day can still drag! When we're not having fun, those hours can feel like years...your poem captures the agony. Lol well said.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Even when the clock is right, the day can still drag! When we're not having fun, those hours can feel like years...your poem captures the agony. Lol well said.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Hi June thanks for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Bryce 1
Yea, if I don't know what time it is and I really want to know what time it is, each second can drone by at a pace most suspenseful. But, on the other hand, if I am aware of the time and am able to calculate where I need to be and what i need to do and when, then the day will stream smoothly as, like a feather in the breeze, I waft from one moment to the next, like a monkey swinging from branch to branch, without hesitation, because I know what time it is, and that's enough for me to live in the moment
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Yea, if I don't know what time it is and I really want to know what time it is, each second can drone by at a pace most suspenseful. But, on the other hand, if I am aware of the time and am able to calculate where I need to be and what i need to do and when, then the day will stream smoothly as, like a feather in the breeze, I waft from one moment to the next, like a monkey swinging from branch to branch, without hesitation, because I know what time it is, and that's enough for me to live in the moment
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2024
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Hi Bryce, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Darlene BoClair
I like that one can clock watch from the time they start a project until the end.
Indeed even a few minutes wrong can make for a long day. I like how you value time. You've created a great contest entry
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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I like that one can clock watch from the time they start a project until the end.
Indeed even a few minutes wrong can make for a long day. I like how you value time. You've created a great contest entry
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Hi Darlene, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Teri7
Donna, This is a very well written one line poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. I know about days that seem very long my friend! Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Donna, This is a very well written one line poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. I know about days that seem very long my friend! Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 27-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Hi Teri, thank you for your comments and review and for your best wishes. Blessings and a Happy New Year! Donna
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You are so welcome Donna! I hope you have a very Happy and blessed New Year! love and blessings, Teri
Comment from patcelaw
Even a broken clock is right twice a day. I hope that I'm right at least twice a day myself. I wish you the very best in the contest and may you have a wonderful new year. May God's richest blessings be bestowed upon you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Even a broken clock is right twice a day. I hope that I'm right at least twice a day myself. I wish you the very best in the contest and may you have a wonderful new year. May God's richest blessings be bestowed upon you. Patricia.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Hi Patricia, thank you for your comments and review. Thank you for your best wishes and may you have a wonderful new year too! God bless you. Dove
Comment from Sugarray77
I like this wee little verse that you have written. Your philosophical phrase is very true and a concept we can all relate to here on FS. Well done and I wish you luck in the future.
Melissa
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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I like this wee little verse that you have written. Your philosophical phrase is very true and a concept we can all relate to here on FS. Well done and I wish you luck in the future.
Melissa
Comment Written 27-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Hi Melissa, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
