BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "Serene"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
perfect 5/7/5 linked to the previous 7/7 renga poem, I'm so happy you contributed to the Renga Book. It's an excellent chapter. The poem has the right composition. Beautiful presentation and imagery. Good syllables and connection between lines.
gypsy
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perfect 5/7/5 linked to the previous 7/7 renga poem, I'm so happy you contributed to the Renga Book. It's an excellent chapter. The poem has the right composition. Beautiful presentation and imagery. Good syllables and connection between lines.
gypsy
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
Comment from Mark D. R.
June,
Regardless of the Renga followup, your poem can stand on its own. Your choice of artwork really complements your background color and text.
Very, very nice overall presentation!
Mark
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June,
Regardless of the Renga followup, your poem can stand on its own. Your choice of artwork really complements your background color and text.
Very, very nice overall presentation!
Mark
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
Comment from Avery Daniel
This is a beautiful haiku. I can be very picky about what I like, especially within short poetry, but you rocked this one! Every single word seems to fit both the preceding word. It's just a really beautiful poem which ended with a huge bang.
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This is a beautiful haiku. I can be very picky about what I like, especially within short poetry, but you rocked this one! Every single word seems to fit both the preceding word. It's just a really beautiful poem which ended with a huge bang.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
