Comment from ESOSTINE

Excellent

This poem is beautifully composed, with imagery. I love the complementary clip that roams around, exploring the nooks and crannies, trying to find what no man has ever found. Well done, dear Gypsy.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2024

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This three-line poem, Riding the Roomba, has the proper formatting and shows the cat receiving its just deserts. There will be no walking from place to place at that address anymore.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

I am old enough to totally get this poem! Don't know why cats loved this vacuum cleaner - but this one is traveling in style to meet Mr Spock...Put a smile on my face.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024

LoL I love star treak 😊

Thank you very much

Gypsy

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I was a huge Star Trek fan growing up. Captain Kirk was hilarious with his dramatic acting. But it was so unique. Of course, a cat on a Roomba is just as groundbreaking. Lol. I enjoyed this. Gretchen

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024

I loved star treak.

Thank you very much 😊

Gypsy

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

OMG that is the cutest thing ever! The poem is adorable in its three lines but that animated cat has my heart lol those little paws sticking up in the air!! lol Thanks for the smiles.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024

Hahaha... I'm so happy you like it.

Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊

Have a wonderful weekend.

Gypsy

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this Lune contest with us. I'm curious why the entry title isn't highlighted in blue like it usually is. Oh well, I did enjoy reading this entry and the presentation. Again, it's as usual, wonderful. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024

Thank you very much 😊 I appreciate your lovely review. Happy holidays

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Cindy Decker 3

Excellent

Gypsy,
This is a lovely metaphor about fall. I like the way your poem is displayed.
An excellent sentori.
I hope you're having a nice day.
I'm ok, but I think I just saw the devil fly by in ice skates. Brr. I hate winter.
Have a blessed Christmas, Gypsy
Cindy

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024

Thank you very much 😊 I appreciate your lovely review. Happy holidays

Gypsy hugs

reply by Cindy Decker 3 on 20-Dec-2024

You're welcome, Gypsy

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-A well written lune with a good topic.
-Very good description of sunset,
and a very good concluding line.
-Yesterday at sunset, the sky was
a reddish pink behind our neighbor's house.
-It was gorgeous.
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024

Thank you very much 😊 I appreciate your lovely review. Happy holidays

Gypsy hugs

reply by Pam (respa) on 20-Dec-2024

You are very welcome, Gypsy. Happy Holidays to you, too.

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

I enjoyed your lune poem for the 5-3-5 contest. Fields of grain in a stirring breeze does appear to be waving goodbye. This has awesome imagery and is beautifully illustrated.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024

Thank you very much 😊 I appreciate your lovely review. Happy holidays

Gypsy hugs

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

This is such a beautiful presentation for the contest. I think you have a winner here.loved it from my very first read. Good luck Gypsy, and have a great day.
RJ

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024

Thank you very much 😊 I appreciate your lovely review. Happy holidays

Gypsy hugs