Christmas Mouse
A short verse, for this season.9 total reviews
Comment from Nicki.B
This is super cute I love it. This Christmas mouse really kept thing under wraps didn't he, though he was there for thr whole thing! And even helped out where it could. I absolutely love the angle you took with this, it's clever, simple, fun and adorable. Well done!!!
Nicki
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This is super cute I love it. This Christmas mouse really kept thing under wraps didn't he, though he was there for thr whole thing! And even helped out where it could. I absolutely love the angle you took with this, it's clever, simple, fun and adorable. Well done!!!
Nicki
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
Comment from jmdg1954
Quite the interesting take on a Christmas poem. I thoroughly enjoyed this story of the excited little mouse on the greatest day in history.
Easily read and presented.
Thank you.
John
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Quite the interesting take on a Christmas poem. I thoroughly enjoyed this story of the excited little mouse on the greatest day in history.
Easily read and presented.
Thank you.
John
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
Comment from Laurie Holding
Just freaking adorable. Thank you for posting this sweet, short, beauty of a poem. You should do a whole series and make a chapbook out of it. Well done, and I wish you Merry Christmas.
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Just freaking adorable. Thank you for posting this sweet, short, beauty of a poem. You should do a whole series and make a chapbook out of it. Well done, and I wish you Merry Christmas.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
Comment from Brenda Strauser
A very nice poem. It was clever to use a mouse at that time. Picture goes well with the mouse. Nice description of the birth of N Jesus as the mouse saw it.
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A very nice poem. It was clever to use a mouse at that time. Picture goes well with the mouse. Nice description of the birth of N Jesus as the mouse saw it.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Every now and then an entry comes along that tickles The ivories like Liberace did On a keyboard
Well done
And a Merry Christmas, Happy New Year
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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Every now and then an entry comes along that tickles The ivories like Liberace did On a keyboard
Well done
And a Merry Christmas, Happy New Year
Hbeubuhidwhubuwdhuhudwbuhuhswuuhuhuhuhdw
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much for the 6 stars..truly appreciated
Comment from pome lover
weeelll, that's a lovely thought, and a neat poem and I give you credit for both - which I am happy to do - I just have a thing about mice. I know they can't help being what they are, but that big picture didn't help.
I bet Mary probably didn't see him. :)
Katharine
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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weeelll, that's a lovely thought, and a neat poem and I give you credit for both - which I am happy to do - I just have a thing about mice. I know they can't help being what they are, but that big picture didn't help.
I bet Mary probably didn't see him. :)
Katharine
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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I love your comments, thank you
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I love your comments, thank you
Comment from Teri7
This is a very sweet poem that goes well with the holiday of Christmas. You used great descriptive words and an adorable picture of the little mouse. Thank you for sharing. It made me and my heart smile. Even the smallest of creatures were made by God! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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This is a very sweet poem that goes well with the holiday of Christmas. You used great descriptive words and an adorable picture of the little mouse. Thank you for sharing. It made me and my heart smile. Even the smallest of creatures were made by God! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Many thanks for taking the time to review and comment.
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Many thanks for taking the time to review and comment.
Comment from Trina Layne
This little guy made me smile. A mouse's perspective on the Christmas story - thanks for presenting this idea. Congratulations on your piece. Keep writing!
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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This little guy made me smile. A mouse's perspective on the Christmas story - thanks for presenting this idea. Congratulations on your piece. Keep writing!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Thank you, much appreciated.
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Thank you, much appreciated.
Comment from Angel Debbie
You sure were a smart mouse to see and do all that stuff. Great little write. I thank you for sharing and the picture was a perfect pick. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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You sure were a smart mouse to see and do all that stuff. Great little write. I thank you for sharing and the picture was a perfect pick. Have a great day!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Thank you Angela
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Thank you Angela
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Your welcome