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First Snowfall

a nature 5-7-5

3 total reviews 
Comment from l.raven
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I love the snow...
I'm spending the holidays in Florida
with my daughter and her family...
I live in Illinois...and can't wait to get
back to see the snow...
I love your poem...and so love your picture...
very well written...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
    Thank you, Linda, for your kind words. I live near Chicago and the snow we got last night has mostly melted. Enjoy that Florida warmth.
reply by l.raven on 21-Dec-2024
    I will...but I hope to be home soon...
    I live out in the corn belt...surround
    by corn fields...but I love it...
    I used to live Northlake...Franklin pk..
    now I out near Plano...Sandwich...

    your so very welcome...love xxoo
Comment from Beejay
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I love the technique, your style. Your word choice, and the ability to conform to the poem's requirements of having the necessary syllables on every line is masterful . The simplicity of the words reinforce the poems message...

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    Thank you so much, Beejay, for your kind words about my poem.
Comment from Alicia johnston
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Lovely written very easy and happy and fresh look on beauty. The changing of the seasons usually in Texas comes in the blink of an eye never a slow build . You describe it beautifully. It's very difficult for me to write short poems but congrats you nailed it.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    Thank you very much, Alicia, for your kind praise of my poem.