First Snowfall
a nature 5-7-53 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
I love the snow...
I'm spending the holidays in Florida
with my daughter and her family...
I live in Illinois...and can't wait to get
back to see the snow...
I love your poem...and so love your picture...
very well written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
I love the snow...
I'm spending the holidays in Florida
with my daughter and her family...
I live in Illinois...and can't wait to get
back to see the snow...
I love your poem...and so love your picture...
very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Linda, for your kind words. I live near Chicago and the snow we got last night has mostly melted. Enjoy that Florida warmth.
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I will...but I hope to be home soon...
I live out in the corn belt...surround
by corn fields...but I love it...
I used to live Northlake...Franklin pk..
now I out near Plano...Sandwich...
your so very welcome...love xxoo
Comment from Beejay
I love the technique, your style. Your word choice, and the ability to conform to the poem's requirements of having the necessary syllables on every line is masterful . The simplicity of the words reinforce the poems message...
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
I love the technique, your style. Your word choice, and the ability to conform to the poem's requirements of having the necessary syllables on every line is masterful . The simplicity of the words reinforce the poems message...
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much, Beejay, for your kind words about my poem.
Comment from Alicia johnston
Lovely written very easy and happy and fresh look on beauty. The changing of the seasons usually in Texas comes in the blink of an eye never a slow build . You describe it beautifully. It's very difficult for me to write short poems but congrats you nailed it.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
Lovely written very easy and happy and fresh look on beauty. The changing of the seasons usually in Texas comes in the blink of an eye never a slow build . You describe it beautifully. It's very difficult for me to write short poems but congrats you nailed it.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, Alicia, for your kind praise of my poem.