Comment from Mark D. R.

Exceptional

Very nice overall presentation for this contest entry.

Your poem gently explains this 'sports' activity in a way all readers will easily understand/envision.

IMHO ... your entry will garner support from the FS reviewers.

I too use FanArtist avmurray for many of my poem posts. I am really OK with your illustration choice.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024

So very kind, Mark. Thank you.

reply by Mark D. R. on 21-Dec-2024

Must have been in my inner soul to do so (-:

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

They perform Tai Chi in my park every Monday morning, it is a joy to watch. Gathering all the good energy and deflecting the negative, I felt the uplifting magic in this post, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024

Thank you, Dolly.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5, Tai Chi, has the proper formatting and speaks to the utilization of a "soft strength" which provides power for living and insights for living better.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Thanks, Bill.