My day to day life
Poem about nature, tea and the small things, meaning2 total reviews
Comment from Beejay
Your poem is captivating, the imagery in the third verse,
Birds take flight, their songs a thread,
Weaving through the skies overhead,
paint such a vivid picture, enabling the reader to be drawn into the words.
Well done
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Your poem is captivating, the imagery in the third verse,
Birds take flight, their songs a thread,
Weaving through the skies overhead,
paint such a vivid picture, enabling the reader to be drawn into the words.
Well done
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
Comment from Peter Jarvis
You poem is a beautiful ode to the simple pleasures and profound meanings found in nature and daily rituals. You've captured the essence of tranquility and reflection with such grace
and eloquence
In my view your poem is wonderfully evocative and soothing. The flow is natural, and the imagery is rich and detailed, making it a pleasure to read. The closing lines beautifully encapsulate the poem's message, tying everything together with a sense of appreciation and calm.
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You poem is a beautiful ode to the simple pleasures and profound meanings found in nature and daily rituals. You've captured the essence of tranquility and reflection with such grace
and eloquence
In my view your poem is wonderfully evocative and soothing. The flow is natural, and the imagery is rich and detailed, making it a pleasure to read. The closing lines beautifully encapsulate the poem's message, tying everything together with a sense of appreciation and calm.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
