2024 Year that Was
2024 In Cherita Verse form2 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This poem sums up a whole year of your life in just a few lines. It is well organized and flows smoothly from beginning to end.
You have one small typo:
Angela's (indoscopy)-should be (endoscopy)
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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This poem sums up a whole year of your life in just a few lines. It is well organized and flows smoothly from beginning to end.
You have one small typo:
Angela's (indoscopy)-should be (endoscopy)
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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thanks a lot
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You're welcome
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your Cherita verse "2024 Year that Was" is a captivating and detailed chronicle of the year's events. You've managed to capture the essence of each month with a blend of personal experiences and broader political and social happenings. The format works well to convey the passage of time and the various ups and downs encountered throughout the year.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Your Cherita verse "2024 Year that Was" is a captivating and detailed chronicle of the year's events. You've managed to capture the essence of each month with a blend of personal experiences and broader political and social happenings. The format works well to convey the passage of time and the various ups and downs encountered throughout the year.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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thanks a lot
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Stay safe and well.