Exposure
Telling on me tells on you3 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Sometimes, as a human, we all have the tendency to jump to conclusions or assume. And I must say, when I noticed your poem's name "Exposure," I and saw the snake picture, I wasn't exactly on the right track.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Sometimes, as a human, we all have the tendency to jump to conclusions or assume. And I must say, when I noticed your poem's name "Exposure," I and saw the snake picture, I wasn't exactly on the right track.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Well, I just ran a few possible tracks in my imagination ..and here I was thinking a straight up snake in the grass.
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There are plenty of those. :-)
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your poem powerfully explores the themes of betrayal, truth, and liberation. The vivid imagery and emotive language convey a strong sense of anger and eventual freedom from the burden of secrecy. The contrast between the "final act" and the "opening night" is particularly striking, symbolizing a new beginning born from the end of deceit.
Keep writing!
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Your poem powerfully explores the themes of betrayal, truth, and liberation. The vivid imagery and emotive language convey a strong sense of anger and eventual freedom from the burden of secrecy. The contrast between the "final act" and the "opening night" is particularly striking, symbolizing a new beginning born from the end of deceit.
Keep writing!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Peter, for the review and your thoughtful comments.
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Take care Nicki
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think the moment we let a secret slip out, we have regret. Betraying someone's confidence is unforgivable and there is no turning back, your poem is poignant and honest Nicki, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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I think the moment we let a secret slip out, we have regret. Betraying someone's confidence is unforgivable and there is no turning back, your poem is poignant and honest Nicki, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Dolly, for your review and thoughtful comments.
