The Circus Strongman
The strongman laid bare3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Alex,
This is a well written free verse that says a man can be the opposite of what his legend states. You shouldn't judge a book by its cover or a person by gossip or legend.
Keep writing and stay healthy
I think this should do well in the contest.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
Joan
P S I would like you to know that I recently published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page it you are interested.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Hi Alex,
This is a well written free verse that says a man can be the opposite of what his legend states. You shouldn't judge a book by its cover or a person by gossip or legend.
Keep writing and stay healthy
I think this should do well in the contest.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
Joan
P S I would like you to know that I recently published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page it you are interested.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the review. I hope you had a great Christmas as well!
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You're welcome and thanks, Alex.
Joan
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Alex,
This is a nice poem about the strong man. It is a very good free form poem. It is well organized and flows quite nicely to completion.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Alex,
This is a nice poem about the strong man. It is a very good free form poem. It is well organized and flows quite nicely to completion.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thanks.
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You're welcome
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your poem beautifully captures the essence of the circus strongman, blending the awe of his physical prowess with the tenderness of his inner self. The imagery is vivid, and the contrast between his outward strength and inner gentleness is poignant. Here are a few suggestions to enhance the flow and impact of your poem:
Take care and keep writing.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Your poem beautifully captures the essence of the circus strongman, blending the awe of his physical prowess with the tenderness of his inner self. The imagery is vivid, and the contrast between his outward strength and inner gentleness is poignant. Here are a few suggestions to enhance the flow and impact of your poem:
Take care and keep writing.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your kind words.
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Take care and stay safe
