Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Marival, I have never heard of this
form my sweet friend...but it is close to
the 5-7-5...
these poems are always so easy to write...
and make them speak...but you are a master
at them...
I love this poem...we are coming into winter...
and this one is a pick me up...and your pictures...beautiful...
very nicely done you...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊 Linda xoxox hugs


Marival

reply by l.raven on 19-Dec-2024

always so welcome beautiful you...love xxoo 🤗❤️🌼🙏

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

*sneeze* would not want to be in thar field IRL lol

great transition from the bees
and from this, one can go anywhere...
nice imagery and smooth flow
no spag or typos

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024

Thank you very much 😊 have a nice day.

Gypsy

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This painted such a beautiful poem. The flowers were bright and cheery as presented in this poem. I really like this form of poetry. Still concise but not as structured as a haiku. A little more free, i guess. Beautifully written. Gretchen

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024

Thank you very much 😊 have a nice day.

Gypsy

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

Beautiful Renga poem that captures the eye and the imagination in vivid color.
Goid morningvto you, hope you are having a great morning so far. Thank you for sharing.
RJ

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024

Thank you very much 😊 have a nice day.

Gypsy

reply by RJ Heritage on 17-Dec-2024

My pleasure
RJ

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

No one could dispute the picturesque quality of nature's palette! I like the personification in "Sunday best." A delightful 5-7-5 for the book. Well done, Gypsy. Debbie

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024

Thank you very much 😊 have a nice day.

Gypsy

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Gypsy,

Another good addition to this Renga collaboration. Do like the flow of your thoughts. Nature gets all gussied up as Sunday's best! Your artwork just adds to your overall presentation.

Mark

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024

Thank you very much 😊 have a nice day.

Gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Ah, isn't it wonderful that Nature's "Sunday best" is visible so much of the year. I liked your alliterative "field of fresh flowers" and the description of the colors as "picturesque palette."

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024

Thank you very much, big sister 😊 have a nice day.

Love,

Marival ❤️