Comment from
dragonpoet
Hi Adam.
This lune gives good advice. You should never forget who and what you are to gain love from someone. That is not true love on the either side.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Merry Christmas.
Joan
P S I would like to let you know that I just published a book titled,
"The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is
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bottom of my profile page or you can go to Amazon and
search Joan Pechter The Interloper.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
reply by dragonpoet on 17-Dec-2024
Don't mention it, Trina.
Joan
Comment from
lyenochka
There's not much to go on with this very brief poem. I can only speculate based on the title of "Adam reflects". Did Adam regret foolishly eating the apple because his beloved Eve ate it first? I won't guess but believe the Fall affects us all. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
It depends on how you read it. The interpretation is left to the reader.