God's Gracious Love
It is powerful.3 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very nice poem, Darla. You always do well in showing your faith in God. If the judges don't approve of this one, I'm sure that He will. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Very nice poem, Darla. You always do well in showing your faith in God. If the judges don't approve of this one, I'm sure that He will. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thanks!
Comment from Peter Jarvis
This poem beautifully captures the essence of divine love and guidance, emphasising the comforting presence of God in our daily lives. The imagery of nature, such as clouds and trees, effectively conveys the omnipresence of His love, making it relatable and vivid. The structure flows well, allowing readers to feel the rhythm and sincerity behind each line.
The poem's themes of faith, hope, and self-belief resonate deeply, reminding us of the importance of embracing our talents and sharing them with others. The invitation to study God's words and teach them reflects a sense of community and responsibility to uplift one another.
Overall, this entry is a heartfelt testament to the power of faith and love, encouraging readers to reflect on their spiritual journey and the strength they can find in God's presence. It stands out with its positive message and uplifting tone, making it a worthy submission for the Free Form Poetry Contest.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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This poem beautifully captures the essence of divine love and guidance, emphasising the comforting presence of God in our daily lives. The imagery of nature, such as clouds and trees, effectively conveys the omnipresence of His love, making it relatable and vivid. The structure flows well, allowing readers to feel the rhythm and sincerity behind each line.
The poem's themes of faith, hope, and self-belief resonate deeply, reminding us of the importance of embracing our talents and sharing them with others. The invitation to study God's words and teach them reflects a sense of community and responsibility to uplift one another.
Overall, this entry is a heartfelt testament to the power of faith and love, encouraging readers to reflect on their spiritual journey and the strength they can find in God's presence. It stands out with its positive message and uplifting tone, making it a worthy submission for the Free Form Poetry Contest.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thanks so much for the six stars and for your heartfelt words about my poem, are you new here, Peter?
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Fairly new - since October.
Take care
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Thanks again for the six stars.
Comment from Elizabeth Delaney
Moving pome about faith and preaching.
The flow of reading is consistent and the message is clearly laid out and received.
Great writing, well done.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Moving pome about faith and preaching.
The flow of reading is consistent and the message is clearly laid out and received.
Great writing, well done.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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If my poem is great, why the four stars??? I am baffled.
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My apologies, my phone screen is quite small and had miss clicked. Corrected now.
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It still says four stars.
