Comment from
Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great poem, but a little sad. The rhyming flows nicely throughout the poem. The poem flows nicely from start to finish.
You have one small typo:
Im sure (youre) gates -(your)
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
Comment from
Peter Jarvis
Morning Dawn" is a poignant and evocative free-form poem that captures a day filled with reflection, grief, and a deep sense of loss. The vivid imagery and raw emotions make this piece highly relatable and impactful.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024