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Morning Dawn

Free Form Poem

2 total reviews 
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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This is a great poem, but a little sad. The rhyming flows nicely throughout the poem. The poem flows nicely from start to finish.

You have one small typo:

Im sure (youre) gates -(your)

Well done

Cecilia


 Comment Written 16-Dec-2024

Comment from Peter Jarvis
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Morning Dawn" is a poignant and evocative free-form poem that captures a day filled with reflection, grief, and a deep sense of loss. The vivid imagery and raw emotions make this piece highly relatable and impactful.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2024