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The Best Encounter Ever Told

Jesus and Santa's special event for all the children.

11 total reviews 
Comment from Ric Myworld
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I'm a true sucker for happy stories and touching endings; and especially, during the holiday season when not everyone has reason to celebrate and be jolly. Happy Birthday, Jesus! Merry Christmas to All! And Congratulations on your contest winner! Welcome to FanStory!

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2024

reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
    Thank you so much for your kind words and great review. Happy birthday Jesus! Merry Christmas to you too.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Hi Lana,
Thank you for creating such a new and special story tying in the story of Santa and Jesus. I think children could hear the story and get a deeper feel for the spiritual aspect of the season.

Congratulations on winning the contest with your charming story.

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2024

reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
    Thank you, Ronda. It was a fun one to create. I appreciate your review.
Comment from jmdg1954
Exceptional
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I certainly understand why this was a cont ed t winner. The idea of the story was so simple; Jesus and Santa Claus. Perfect.

Then the manner in which you developed the theme and told the story was great.

Thank you for sharing. This should be published!
John

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    Thank you so much for the awesome review and stars, John! I do think I should turn this into a book. I'm just not sure how.
Comment from lancellot
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An a very nice story. The true meaning of Christmas is correct. I can see why this won the contest. It has a strong religious or Christian theme that goes hand-n-hand with what Christmas is supposed to be about. Ah, the members couldn't resist this one. Well done.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    Thank you so much for your kind review!
Comment from DonandVicki
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A very novel idea, Santa Clause and Jesus get together to bring out the true meaning of Christmas, together with commercialism. A thought that boggles the mind.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2024

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
    Thank you was fun when I thought of it.
Comment from LJbutterfly
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This is a beautiful story bringing together two super stars defining the meaning of Christmas. Since nothing about religion or Christianity is taught in schools, there are generations of children who do not know Christmas celebrates of birth of Jesus. However, they ALL know Santa and most expect new toys. Your story describes a delightful imaginary scene. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2024

reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
    Thank you so much. It made me excited to write about it as I pondered what to write about that wasn't your typical Christmas story. And as you know, the creativity grows from that first spark. Thank you for your review and your well wishes.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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I think this is an excellent and imaginative story, combining Santa with Jesus and reminding the children that Christmas is more than material gifts. It's a time to enjoy the spiritual significance of love, peace and good will. Your flash is well written with a compelling message. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2024

reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
    Thank you so much! I was really excited when this idea came across my mind to write about. I appreciate the time you took to review.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Very creative. Error-free writing as far as I can tell.
I don't believe I've ever read anyone joining Santa and Jesus.
I hope there wasn't a cut-off in age.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2024

reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
    Thank you so much! I don't think I have either so when this entered my mind, I was excited to write about it. Thank you for your review and well wishes.
Comment from Avery Daniel
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This is phenomenal! Not a single grammar error. Read fantastically, each word building to the next. I would've like to heard more about how the children processed the event. But it truly made clear that Christmas isn't just about gifts; it's about community. And if Santa is to bring presents to kids, they should understand the sacrifice Jesus made. Just a beautiful idea, and boy was it written well! Great job!

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 Comment Written 16-Dec-2024

reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
    Thank you for your time and review. It was fun coming up with the idea in writing about it. Happy Monday.
Comment from Teri7
Exceptional
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I love this story! I wish somehow that would truly happen. I read this to my 10 year old grandson. Thank you for this great blessing and may God bless you this Christmas and every day! Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2024

reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
    Thank you Teri!
    I'd like to turn into a children's book. I think that you're your grandson. I read it to my granddaughter this morning. She's 6.