Just a piece of paper
The effect of a broken home. A pawn in an adults game.5 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Elizabeth,
First and foremost welcome to fanstory. I hope you like it as well as I do. There are a ton of authors and poets who are awesome and will help if needed. The key to success on this sight is to find authors and poets and send them a fan request. Some will return one for you. This starts your network of reviewers. The higher up you post your poem the more reads you will get. Just some of the things I have learned since joining in September.
Your poem was great. I like how you liken it to a piece of paper/mail. It flows nicely and is well organized.
Well done.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Elizabeth,
First and foremost welcome to fanstory. I hope you like it as well as I do. There are a ton of authors and poets who are awesome and will help if needed. The key to success on this sight is to find authors and poets and send them a fan request. Some will return one for you. This starts your network of reviewers. The higher up you post your poem the more reads you will get. Just some of the things I have learned since joining in September.
Your poem was great. I like how you liken it to a piece of paper/mail. It flows nicely and is well organized.
Well done.
Cecilia
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much for your advice
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed this journey through the realities of love and how cruel it can be and also how soothing it can be when we are in the right arms. An inventive and clever post, much enjoyed and welcome to Fanstory Elizabeth, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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I enjoyed this journey through the realities of love and how cruel it can be and also how soothing it can be when we are in the right arms. An inventive and clever post, much enjoyed and welcome to Fanstory Elizabeth, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind words
Comment from pookietoo
This is a marvelous free form entry. I see this is your very first entry, welcome aboard! I feel this poem came from your heart. Keep up the wonderful work and post as often as you can.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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This is a marvelous free form entry. I see this is your very first entry, welcome aboard! I feel this poem came from your heart. Keep up the wonderful work and post as often as you can.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much! I will.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Congrats on your first post! I loved the way you showed the journey from being mistreated to finally being valued. The final lines were so uplifting. It's clear you put a lot of heart into this. It really shines through. I'm excited to see what you write next!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Congrats on your first post! I loved the way you showed the journey from being mistreated to finally being valued. The final lines were so uplifting. It's clear you put a lot of heart into this. It really shines through. I'm excited to see what you write next!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much! And I am glad you enjoyed the last lines. I always think where possible in a darker theme to find some resolution even if it's little.
Comment from Trina Layne
I felt sad reading this. It seems as if you use your writing to deal with your troubles. It's nice to have an outlet. It is well-written. Best of luck to you in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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I felt sad reading this. It seems as if you use your writing to deal with your troubles. It's nice to have an outlet. It is well-written. Best of luck to you in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much for your feedback! And yes at the moment it is my biggest relief but also pride.
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Most welcome. I am happy that you feel proud about what you do. That's awesome!
