Willing Hearts
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Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Barbara,
I'm sorry I don't have another 6 for this sweet and moving chapter. We see in it that Myra had a really rough time of it in her captivity. I'm glad she made it out, but not untouched. That's sad, but I like the way Sammi and Noah are committed to helping her recover and have a home when she gets out.
Christmas Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Hi Barbara,
I'm sorry I don't have another 6 for this sweet and moving chapter. We see in it that Myra had a really rough time of it in her captivity. I'm glad she made it out, but not untouched. That's sad, but I like the way Sammi and Noah are committed to helping her recover and have a home when she gets out.
Christmas Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Not a problem. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from eliz100
I am so glad I found you. When I finish here, I will be friends with you. This is an excellent chapter. There is one edit.
"He covered it (add with)his hand attempting to ignore it.
Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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I am so glad I found you. When I finish here, I will be friends with you. This is an excellent chapter. There is one edit.
"He covered it (add with)his hand attempting to ignore it.
Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you for giving me enough information I could find that mistake. Another reviewer mentioned it but I read over and over again, searching for it. I appreciate the help. THANK YOU!!!!
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Have you published any books since I was gone.
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Not sure. When did you leave? I have a total of 9 books published.
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Sorry 8 published books. I got ahead of myself.
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I have been off for almost a year.
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I've had 'Prayers Answered,' and maybe, 'Love for the Win', and 'Texas Enticement' published this year.
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Congratulations!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Myra has a long way ahead until she is well. Thankfully she has Sami and Noah on her side. She is lucky.
Well done, Barbara, another compelling chapter. It's nice to see Noah and sami's relationship. It's hard to believe they met a month ago. But when the right one comes along you know.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Myra has a long way ahead until she is well. Thankfully she has Sami and Noah on her side. She is lucky.
Well done, Barbara, another compelling chapter. It's nice to see Noah and sami's relationship. It's hard to believe they met a month ago. But when the right one comes along you know.
Gypsy
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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When it's right, it's right. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Barbara,
I enjoyed this chapter. I think I must have missed something along the way, I don't recall reading anything about Amber in previous posts. I liked the way this chapter moved along, passing from one character to the next, without being overwhelming.
Have a blessed evening gal.
Tom
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Hello Barbara,
I enjoyed this chapter. I think I must have missed something along the way, I don't recall reading anything about Amber in previous posts. I liked the way this chapter moved along, passing from one character to the next, without being overwhelming.
Have a blessed evening gal.
Tom
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Sami found her letters in the puzzle box. She didn't actually show up until now. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Sami's strong character shows through as she wishes to become Myra's sponsor. Noah's promise to be there with Sami to help Myra may be really hard to realize. There are two problems: Pararaph 10 ends in quotes but you used third person. Noah's wrist comm . . . sentence has missing word.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Sami's strong character shows through as she wishes to become Myra's sponsor. Noah's promise to be there with Sami to help Myra may be really hard to realize. There are two problems: Pararaph 10 ends in quotes but you used third person. Noah's wrist comm . . . sentence has missing word.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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I searched for these errors and couldn't find them. I will keep searching. Maybe somebody will comment on them with more information. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
Aww. Noah and Sami are going on dates and even have papers to adopt Myra. Wow, they're practically parents before marriage! That's so sweet.
One suggestion:
"Yes, Mateo carried you out, and I ensured both your safety as you left." Sami studied Noah as he" (I would put a speech tag about Noah because it's always jarring to me to see someone else's name after quote.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Aww. Noah and Sami are going on dates and even have papers to adopt Myra. Wow, they're practically parents before marriage! That's so sweet.
One suggestion:
"Yes, Mateo carried you out, and I ensured both your safety as you left." Sami studied Noah as he" (I would put a speech tag about Noah because it's always jarring to me to see someone else's name after quote.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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I'll see what I can do about that sentence. Maybe it needs a complete rewrite. Thank you for pointing it out.
Comment from Ric Myworld
No matter how bad things were, or how bad they get, most of the time something as simple as a cheeseburger can go a long toward making things better, long as you aren't the one who's hurt. :-) Sorry, just couldn't help myself. Now you know how I think when it comes to food. Great job!
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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No matter how bad things were, or how bad they get, most of the time something as simple as a cheeseburger can go a long toward making things better, long as you aren't the one who's hurt. :-) Sorry, just couldn't help myself. Now you know how I think when it comes to food. Great job!
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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In my opinion a good cheeseburger is the best food. Now, it has to be a good cheeseburger, not the fast-food garbage. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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I agree. Great minds think alike. :-)
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So true
Comment from royowen
A very touching episode Barbara, the theme and the characters in this havevtheir own personal stories to tell, and due to Noah's relationship to Sami, it's seems to be melting his heart, so many involved in his type of work could be deeply affected by it, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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A very touching episode Barbara, the theme and the characters in this havevtheir own personal stories to tell, and due to Noah's relationship to Sami, it's seems to be melting his heart, so many involved in his type of work could be deeply affected by it, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Most welcome
Comment from nomi338
Awesome write. The damage done by the monsters engaged in trafficking children or anyone for that matter deserve the harshest sentence allowable under the law. I fear that some of the children who have been abused the most severely may never fully recover. That is heartbreakingly sad. This fills me with a sense of sadness and outrage at the sane time.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Awesome write. The damage done by the monsters engaged in trafficking children or anyone for that matter deserve the harshest sentence allowable under the law. I fear that some of the children who have been abused the most severely may never fully recover. That is heartbreakingly sad. This fills me with a sense of sadness and outrage at the sane time.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the kind review and the understanding.
Comment from Jacob1395
Excellent dialogue once again Barbara, you really kept me engaged throughout this chapter. I could feel Sami's concern for Myra and I hope she pulls through and is well soon. An excellent chapter, I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Excellent dialogue once again Barbara, you really kept me engaged throughout this chapter. I could feel Sami's concern for Myra and I hope she pulls through and is well soon. An excellent chapter, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.