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Cutting the Strings3 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is a strong poem. The last two stanzas are proof that stress continues until a decision is made.
Favorite lines:
the lies you dressed in roses
to make me want them.
Also, that is a unique reference to use the moon and gravity to describe a love slowly going sour.
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This is a strong poem. The last two stanzas are proof that stress continues until a decision is made.
Favorite lines:
the lies you dressed in roses
to make me want them.
Also, that is a unique reference to use the moon and gravity to describe a love slowly going sour.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
Comment from Lana Marie
I wonder how many of us have experienced relationships like that. I know I have. It's hard when you're trapped in the control of someone else's manipulative ways. If this is true, good job in expressing your thoughts about being chained and then knowing that you need to cut those strings. Happy Monday.
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I wonder how many of us have experienced relationships like that. I know I have. It's hard when you're trapped in the control of someone else's manipulative ways. If this is true, good job in expressing your thoughts about being chained and then knowing that you need to cut those strings. Happy Monday.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
Comment from Beejay
A strong powerful message you be created. I like the fact that you chose a simple , stark presentation, that was bold of you but it didn't t need any other additives....thank you
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A strong powerful message you be created. I like the fact that you chose a simple , stark presentation, that was bold of you but it didn't t need any other additives....thank you
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
