Reunited Hearts
A mother and son reunite after many yeears apart2 total reviews
Comment from Tista S.
Love it! It is such a surprise! I love how you gave them bond and didn't let go of all the suspense you brought into the story. I hope you continue to write stories, and good luck on winning this contest! ~Tista
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Love it! It is such a surprise! I love how you gave them bond and didn't let go of all the suspense you brought into the story. I hope you continue to write stories, and good luck on winning this contest! ~Tista
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your lovely review.
Take care
Comment from lancellot
Okay, you have a surprise reunion and of finding a long lost child for your main character. You have a good theme, perfect for the FanStory voters, and you have a nice presentation. I would advise adding end punctuations for your first two paragraphs.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Okay, you have a surprise reunion and of finding a long lost child for your main character. You have a good theme, perfect for the FanStory voters, and you have a nice presentation. I would advise adding end punctuations for your first two paragraphs.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Thank you