...Like the First Time
Meeting a virtual partner face to face for the first time3 total reviews
Comment from zanya
The September scene painted here; like a tapestry with color and sound. in this non-fiction post is enthralling - but disappointment awaits 'he's not there.' A sequel may be taking shape in the ether!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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The September scene painted here; like a tapestry with color and sound. in this non-fiction post is enthralling - but disappointment awaits 'he's not there.' A sequel may be taking shape in the ether!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Your comments are kind and most appreciated. Perhaps!
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your narrative beautifully captures the atmosphere and emotions of the moment. The vivid descriptions of the bustling square, the heat, and the anticipation of meeting someone new create a rich and immersive scene. The nuances of the environment and your reflections on the changes brought by the pandemic add depth to the story.
Thank you for sharing this poignant piece. It's a wonderful entry for the True Story Contest. Best of luck!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Your narrative beautifully captures the atmosphere and emotions of the moment. The vivid descriptions of the bustling square, the heat, and the anticipation of meeting someone new create a rich and immersive scene. The nuances of the environment and your reflections on the changes brought by the pandemic add depth to the story.
Thank you for sharing this poignant piece. It's a wonderful entry for the True Story Contest. Best of luck!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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You have a way with words. All smiles. Thank you for your insightful review.
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Take care
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for the scenic view of that part of the world. I like how you showed us the sights and sounds including even a musical description of voices. But the fellow didn't show up? Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the scenic view of that part of the world. I like how you showed us the sights and sounds including even a musical description of voices. But the fellow didn't show up? Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Appreciated. Barbados is a beautiful place.