Ben Paul Persons
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Comment from jim vecchio
There was a lot of drama and action in this one. Very good writing. My only comment would be to have ended this at the three-qurter point and left the action at the end to another chapter, allowing you to broaden the hppenings.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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There was a lot of drama and action in this one. Very good writing. My only comment would be to have ended this at the three-qurter point and left the action at the end to another chapter, allowing you to broaden the hppenings.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Thank you. Good idea (moving the action to the next chapter. In fact, chapter cutting for FanStory has become my number one headache. It's about impossible to give a beginning, middle, and end in each chapter. And you want to give readers 'something'. And then I try to hold chapters to about 1500 words. can't be done sometimes.
Thanks again.
Oh, and thank you immensely for the six stars!