The Yellow House
Narrative of the End of the World2 total reviews
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your poem "The Yellow House" is a haunting and poignant depiction of the end of the world. The imagery is vivid and the emotions are raw, creating a powerful narrative.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Your poem "The Yellow House" is a haunting and poignant depiction of the end of the world. The imagery is vivid and the emotions are raw, creating a powerful narrative.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Sometimes our thoughts are very simply stated to describe a very complicated history. Thank you
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Take care and keep writing.
Blessings.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is a poem that has a subject or theme about the possible end of the world. The lines I thought were strongest were:
in a heavenly-blue oblivious sky
where birds no longer fly
The stanza about children playing in the dark seems to harken back to something similar that may have happened during air raids in England, during World War II perhaps. The last four lines seem to suggest that as well.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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This is a poem that has a subject or theme about the possible end of the world. The lines I thought were strongest were:
in a heavenly-blue oblivious sky
where birds no longer fly
The stanza about children playing in the dark seems to harken back to something similar that may have happened during air raids in England, during World War II perhaps. The last four lines seem to suggest that as well.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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I am delighted that you enjoyed this poetic message. Thank you for your commentary.
