Christmas Feelings
magical time of the year2 total reviews
Comment from Darlene BoClair
Yes, indeed you have written the perfect 5-7-5 poem for a writing prompt. Just honoring the festive season of Christmas is a spirit of love. Merry Christmas!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Yes, indeed you have written the perfect 5-7-5 poem for a writing prompt. Just honoring the festive season of Christmas is a spirit of love. Merry Christmas!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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thanks a lot
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Strengths:
Conciseness: The poem succinctly conveys a warm, uplifting message in just a few words, which is a key strength of the haiku form.
Emotion: The line "Waking up feeling the love" effectively evokes the heartwarming and comforting emotions associated with Christmas morning.
Relevance: The poem aligns well with the prompt, touching on the themes of faith and the spiritual essence of the holiday season.
The phrase "Chrismas Feelings" has only four syllables:
Christ-mas (2 syllables)
Feel-ings (2 syllables)
Title: There is a minor typo in the title ("Christas" instead of "Christmas"). Correcting this will ensure the poem is presented in its best light.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Strengths:
Conciseness: The poem succinctly conveys a warm, uplifting message in just a few words, which is a key strength of the haiku form.
Emotion: The line "Waking up feeling the love" effectively evokes the heartwarming and comforting emotions associated with Christmas morning.
Relevance: The poem aligns well with the prompt, touching on the themes of faith and the spiritual essence of the holiday season.
The phrase "Chrismas Feelings" has only four syllables:
Christ-mas (2 syllables)
Feel-ings (2 syllables)
Title: There is a minor typo in the title ("Christas" instead of "Christmas"). Correcting this will ensure the poem is presented in its best light.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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thanks I will fix that now