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Ashlyn's Story (Revisited)

If I could change my part in her story, I undoubtedly would

2 total reviews 
Comment from Sergeant F. Dare
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Keely, this was incredibly written, I feel that words fail me here and that all I can offer you is my understanding and thanks for the trouble you took in reliving once again this heartbreaking memory from your school years. I hope that you are well tonight.
Sgt. Dare

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2024

reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
    Hi Sgt. Dare!
    I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed my story. It's one that has stayed vivid in my mind over a decade later, and I wanted to capture the rawness of the experience and really show every emotion I felt in that emotional rollercoaster. Sounds like I was successful!

    I appreciate your kindness and support. This definitely had some moments where it was hard to write, but I was so determined to tell this story that I pushed through.

    And I am doing well tonight! I just got off work and am looking forward to a relaxing night. Haha. I hope you are doing well tonight as well.

    Best wishes,
    Keely
reply by Sergeant F. Dare on 14-Dec-2024
    Hallo. Yes, you were successful. I am really sorry for the pain that you've had to experience.
    Have a lovely night. I also am having a good night. So long!
Comment from Rick Gardner
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Very deep, and will disturb anyone that cares for the well being of those around us. Some uncertainty will encompass everyone at some time in their life, you wish you could tell the depths they have reached.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2024

reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
    Hi Rick!
    Thanks for taking the time to my read my piece and for leaving a review!

    I'm glad you enjoyed my piece.
    Have a wonderful day,
    Keely