The Ultimate Gift
A 5-7-5 about Christmas.2 total reviews
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your haiku beautifully encapsulates the essence of Christmas and the profound gift of hope brought by the birth of Christ. The poem's simplicity and depth perfectly capture the spiritual meaning of the holiday season.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Your haiku beautifully encapsulates the essence of Christmas and the profound gift of hope brought by the birth of Christ. The poem's simplicity and depth perfectly capture the spiritual meaning of the holiday season.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you. I deeply appreciate your review and comments.
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Take care and stay safe
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Thank you. You do likewise.
Comment from Bryce 1
Patti Smith said Jesus died for our sins but not mine. I heard that recently and I'm still processing what that means to me. This poem reminded me of that and how I still don't know what it means. Also, the picture for this poem is hilarious
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Patti Smith said Jesus died for our sins but not mine. I heard that recently and I'm still processing what that means to me. This poem reminded me of that and how I still don't know what it means. Also, the picture for this poem is hilarious
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Jesus died for everyones sins. Not all will accept this free gift. She probably meant it in a personal way.
I thank you for the review and I appreciate the comments.