A Prayer for Advent
preparing for Christmas8 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Delaney
A beautiful reminder of what Christmas is.
It feels somewhat demanding, would have loved more grace.
But nonetheless beautiful and a great Christmas message
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A beautiful reminder of what Christmas is.
It feels somewhat demanding, would have loved more grace.
But nonetheless beautiful and a great Christmas message
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great 5-7-5 poem. People need to make room for Jesus in their life. The world is a dark place without Jesus in it.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
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This is a great 5-7-5 poem. People need to make room for Jesus in their life. The world is a dark place without Jesus in it.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and poem to go with it.
-A good opening line gives the premise.
-A good second line that shows how
we need to prepare for His coming.
-A good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
*You have your poem listed as fiction.
Tom is the only one who can change it.
But if you check the genre each time you post,
you will avoid this issue. Go to "Community"
"Ask Us" and let him know the title of your
poem and that you would like it listed as poetry.
It makes a big difference.
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-Good artwork and poem to go with it.
-A good opening line gives the premise.
-A good second line that shows how
we need to prepare for His coming.
-A good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
*You have your poem listed as fiction.
Tom is the only one who can change it.
But if you check the genre each time you post,
you will avoid this issue. Go to "Community"
"Ask Us" and let him know the title of your
poem and that you would like it listed as poetry.
It makes a big difference.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, we know He will come again, it is just a matter of He deems it necessary to help us once again, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Excellent, we know He will come again, it is just a matter of He deems it necessary to help us once again, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
Comment from Avery Daniel
This was a decent poem, but I don't think it meets the guidelines. I may be wrong, as it doesn't seem structured correctly, but it feels like too few syllables
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This was a decent poem, but I don't think it meets the guidelines. I may be wrong, as it doesn't seem structured correctly, but it feels like too few syllables
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your haiku beautifully encapsulates the essence of preparing for Christmas with faith and devotion. The imagery of making space in both heart and home is powerful and evocative, highlighting the importance of spiritual readiness for the celebration of Christ's birth. The poem's concise yet profound message fits perfectly within the 5-7-5 structure.
Thank you for sharing this inspiring piece. It's a lovely reminder of the true meaning of the holiday season
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Your haiku beautifully encapsulates the essence of preparing for Christmas with faith and devotion. The imagery of making space in both heart and home is powerful and evocative, highlighting the importance of spiritual readiness for the celebration of Christ's birth. The poem's concise yet profound message fits perfectly within the 5-7-5 structure.
Thank you for sharing this inspiring piece. It's a lovely reminder of the true meaning of the holiday season
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
Comment from eliz100
You have hit the proverbial nail on the head. I agree with your message. You have summed up Advent in a few words.I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
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You have hit the proverbial nail on the head. I agree with your message. You have summed up Advent in a few words.I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
Comment from lyenochka
What a great message! Indeed we need to clear out so much of the busyness of entertaining, shopping, and card mailing and remember how the Lord gave up everything to redeem us.
Great message. However your form is that of a short fiction instead of poetry. You could ask Tom to change the format.
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What a great message! Indeed we need to clear out so much of the busyness of entertaining, shopping, and card mailing and remember how the Lord gave up everything to redeem us.
Great message. However your form is that of a short fiction instead of poetry. You could ask Tom to change the format.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024