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I've read it several times, and it seems to make sense.2 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Darryn,
You poem is totally confusing to me. I have no idea what you are trying to get across. It is all over the place like your thought is all over the place and very chaotic.
Cecilia
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Darryn,
You poem is totally confusing to me. I have no idea what you are trying to get across. It is all over the place like your thought is all over the place and very chaotic.
Cecilia
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is clever and witty and I read it twice and time is eternal, but we fall into an abyss whereby our time has an end, but time is indeed limitless until the sun eventually fades and the earth dies. I enjoyed your post and wish you luck with the contest, this poem is unusual and unique, love Dolly x x x
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This is clever and witty and I read it twice and time is eternal, but we fall into an abyss whereby our time has an end, but time is indeed limitless until the sun eventually fades and the earth dies. I enjoyed your post and wish you luck with the contest, this poem is unusual and unique, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
